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Singa chapter 1: Venenum (REVISED!)
Started by OmegaZero
(2016-12-04 19:49:15)
OmegaZero (2016-12-04 19:49:16)
why the third upload show
Long story. but why did i make a new topic for Singa chapter 1 when i could Edit it? I want people to notice that i revised it. So, thats why!

“WOO! OH YEAH! ROLLING AROUND AT THE SPEED OF SOUND! GOT PLACES TO GO-”
(Drago) “Could she be any louder?”
(Splat) “She HAS no mute button”
In Splat’s room were Rachel and her friends. “She’s really loud!” Splat said, followed by Rachel’s friend, Clay “You can’t blame her. I personally want to join in with her singing fun.” On clays head sat small blue eyes Dragon, who goes by the name of Drago, who roughly snarled “No, you’ll be as loud as her!” Rachel finally calmed down “WOO!” Rachel yelled. Rachel’s tiny red reploid friend, who is the infamous Maverick Hunter Zero, sighed "Finnaly...We need to talk and-"
(Drago) "THE STORY SAID CALM DOWN RACHEL!"
Splat’s partner, a small fish-like girl, growled: “Fourth wall breaking, much, Drago?!”
“IT’S A NEVER ENDING STORY!” splat yelled, scaring Rachel “WAH!” Rachel turned to look at both Splat and Clay “Now what?” Clay looked over at Rachel. “Umm aren’t we missing someone by the name of X?!” About that time, a young wizard moonlain, who goes by the name of Kid, ran into the room, panting exhaustedly “I’m sorry that I’m late! I was…checking….in on…someone…” Rachel looked Kid, giving him a worried look “So…how’s he doing, X?” Kid shook his head no, sadly “I wish I had good news to make you happy, RMJE, but I don’t…” Kid’s partner, the infamous maverick hunter X, who is about as small as Zero is (wich is about as big as an average mouse) sighed “His fever is getting worse. If we had good news, we would’ve been even later to get him home and...we might not have come”
“X!” Kid scolded “Don’t say things like that.” Rachel started walking to the door when she looked up “Out of many one….” Then she walked off, only confusing the small partners. “What? What does that mean?”
“We ARE a team!”
“I don’t think that’s what she meant, Dragos.” Kid sighed “She meant about her past.” Clay yelled, “does she have a crush on THAT guy?”
“Which guy are we talking about here?!” Splat asked.
Meanwhile, Rachel was in a crystal cavern, seeking for answers about her past and her recent flashbacks. “Rachel, why are we here,” Zero asked,
“To seek help from the Element soul.”
“You want to remove the electricity from your body, right?” Rachel stops and scooped up the tiny Zero from her shoulder “Yes, Zero. But I wanted to figure out how-“
“Rachel, please…I don’t want you to suffer like this.”
“Zero…” Rachel, sighed while spelunking deeper into the cavern. Finally, she found a dark rusty brown rock, wich was the rock crystal. She started speaking in wingdings (translated into English) “H-hey...Can you help me?” It replied, speaking to her in wingdings. “you want the electricity removed from your body as well as your friend cured, is that correct?”
“Yes!”
“I cannot help you with the electricity within your body but the cure for your friend...You're worried about him. You like him yet you won't admit it. the cure for his illness is...”
Back at Splat’s house, everyone was trying to decipher Rachel’s code. “If RMJE can control electricity in a pattern that should be from…something” Splat and Noah both looked at Kid and Clay “Kid, Clay, you two are hiding something.” Before kid could say anything, clay replied, in a creepy voice “DEAD!” then clay realized he had a 'Do'h I missed' moment “uhh oops…I meant, her attack pattern is similar to the thunder storms in Rescue Heroes the movie. And I was whispering to Drago, here, that in the movie, one of the main characters nearly DIED in the children movie!” Splat started laughing “I THOUGHT HE WAS GONNA DIE FOR SURE!” Kid pulled out his Wizard stick and smack Splat upside the head “Be nice!” Noah leaned back and looked at his small partner, mettaton, whispering to him “I don’t understand what they’re saying but I’ll roll with it.” Rachel burst into the room, all bloody and bruised. Clay and Kid got up and ran to Rachel, trying to prevent her from falling, but it was too late. Rachel had collapsed before anyone could get to her. “Splat! Call the ambulance!” Clay shouted as Kid caught the little exhausted Zero, staring at him "...this was no accident" Kid said.
Back at the cave, a young boy, wearing light blue clothing walked into the cave. "I hope I'm not to late-Its here!" the boy touched the earth crystal, saying, “Tero, one of the elemental protectors of the rocks and the cyber elf named Ziemia.” As a boy, that looked like the blue child only he’s clothed in dirt brown clothing, appeared. He looked at Soul curiously “What is the problem? Why are you reawakening us, Soul?” Soul looked away as Ziemia, the brown cyber elf hovered over soul, and said: “The dark elf is being resurrected.”
“Then we must stop her!”
“Tero, don’t let your foolishness and you’re recklessness get the best of you!” Tero nodded as he and Ziemia both ran out of the cave, Soul looked at the crystal and touched it. “…Weil…Dark Elf…Omega Zero. It’s like the elf wars…only this time, I can’t fight…I must only rely on the ones who can."

This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2016-12-16 11:58:34

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The symptoms indicate that an unknown poison has made its way into Billy's bloodstream. Right now he's fighting it off, but we need to find the Antidote.
 

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