BigMooney (2016-01-17 16:43:54)

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Um.. I don't really know why I came up with this story, but it uses characters from a game I used to play a while back (with slightly different names) if you can guess which game you get a cookie.
Also I think the forums hate me cause they think I'm the one who spammed a lot of forum posts that were like 700 years old to the top of the list.. Yeah that wasn't me. Here it is:
This is a tale of a universe overlooked by the gods of other universes, and the eyes of the residents themselves. Our story begins in a town where a boy, calm and confident, stares into the face of a 13ft tall Daragon of royal blood, neither of these beings are ordinary, they come from off world- they come from the black abyss that surrounds the light, as without creatures such as these there would be no light...
As we all know, without darkness there can be no light, and without evil there is no good. However, there was one man... One absolute anomaly that was overlooked in the creation of this universe, his name was Debrone. He was a glitch in the matrix, an abomination. But deep down inside he knew himself to be the single most “good” being ever created. His powers that consisted of controlling fire and all of hell itself did not help in proving his worth and his “good”.
This brings us back to Debrone's battle against the Daragon. Having handed himself in to prove his worth and “good” he was tricked into defeating monsters for the humans who could not, he thought he was good for the world, little did he know of the danger he was putting himself in. As you see, the darkness itself is where his power comes from. And for every monster he kills the darkness declines, revealing the universe to the humans and thus weakening his powers.
After a fierce battle of untold detail our hero of chaos is met by his brother in an astral dream, his brother Vigelan who is a mage and the polar opposite of Debrone was finally contacting him through way of Astral dream, an astral dream is a communication instinct created by the two brothers at birth and was how they talked when they hadn’t yet learned the language of the other beings. Their talk was of the problems in their universes and how Debrone was being manipulated by the humans of his universe, being the kind hearted Debrone he was able to forgive the humans but did have to punish them for their treachery against him, his punishment was their enlightenment. He showed them how to hunt for themselves and thrive on their own accord- this was a punishment as in mere weeks many of the humans would die hunting, until eventually after millennia of training the humans could sustain and even hunt and learn for themselves. Debrone was forgotten, left as a memory and Vigelan had been turned to nothing but a legend.
The world has developed and created many wonderful things, and also the many horrible things. Of which, the false religion. This “religion” which worshipped humans and revered them as gods was not soon forgotten. This horrible creation had grown powerful in their works and even overtook one of the major cities in the developed world- The city of Xydel. Debrone had got word of this and went himself to , he infiltrated the organisation easily and even rose up in ranks without using his words of power until he had an audience with the Supreme Overlord of the false religion. “May I ask you one thing, overlord” said Debrone confidently “Why do we worship you? Are you powerful enough to be worshipped so?” To which the overlord replied “Yes, I am the single most powerful being in this universe, or at least of my time...” Debrone, going under the alias of Richard Von Hartfeld, was confused and could not for the eternal life of him understand why a human, a being so low on the chain of life, could say something such as that without any hesitation “Please, I am confused overlord” he replied, somewhat less confidently. “Have you ever heard of the Legend of Universal Crisis?” Which was the story of the birth of Vigelan and Debrone, “The character that helped us humans thrive to the point we are at now known as Debrone is the only being powerful enough to defeat me- and even that I am not sure of. I want Debrone to work for me. Together him and I would be invincible. And able to do as we please with this universe, and perhaps travel to the other universes” he declared. Debrone was a smart man, with the knowledge of the world and he sought not after bloodshed but peace, however, the Overlord was very different and decided to demonstrate his power... ON RICHARD VON HARTFELD HIMSELFF. The battle began with Richard drawing his sword and deflecting the bean of light, as you see, the overlord was none other than a paradyte. A creature that copies and amplifies the powers of it’s victims, and his former victim was Vigelan! This paradyte was of royal blood, as it also took the shape of another human whilst retaining the powers of Vigelan. He can also share his power to those that worship him, meaning that every single one of the false religion had the powers of a God, unknown to us that these weren’t the fractions of a god’s power, but the real thing! This Paradyte was not a prince of royal blood but was actually a KING of the paradytes. Debrone, even as eternally powerful as he was could not defeat an Army of beings with the powers of Vigelan, using his power of universal teleportation he manages to escape, but this religion, the religion of the New Paradytes, had found out who Debrone was and have the power of Vigelan on their side, they were ready to take over the universe.
Debrone had entered into an unknown universe and had been captured by the natives of this universe was forced to utter his words of power to escape, unknowing to him that he was in his brother’s domain, VIGELAN'S DOMAIN! He searched and searched and even scanned the whole universe for a hint of his brother’s whereabouts but came up empty handed. He then decided to fall asleep. For during sleep, he can contact his brother wherever he may be- in any universe he may be located in, by way of ASTRAL DREAM. His brother is in poor state, and on the verge of ever sleep- which is a kind if death for the ones who are eternal. During ever sleep, their body will be reduced to an atom and their consciousness stored inside if their closest friends body, this is a horrible way to die, as the normal creatures brain can’t handle the impact of having an Eternal enter into it, even if it’s just their consciousness entering inside and within a few days will die or turn mad. Debrone knows what he must do, he must raise an army and must destroy the Religion of the New Paradytes, however this won’t be easy as his own universe has mostly turned against him, he must find the remaining 8 Eternals and fight against the Religion, before it’s too late.

Leave suggestions for his to improve this, this isn't the end of the story, my younger self decided to end on a cliff hanger so now I have to create new ideas for it, but i know pretty much what to do. Also leave names for other Eternals, the current ones are:
1. Debrone
2. Vigelan
3. Jericho
4. Ultaru
(At this point I forgot how many there were and was too lazy to read through and check if I even mentioned it..so there are 4 for now)
And the last name I DID create, good huh?

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Gumball (2016-01-20 04:37:19)

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10/10

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squirtle2016 (2016-02-17 18:00:17)

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Mind blown.

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