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Started by AntiChrist
(2015-10-17 19:56:24)
AntiChrist (2015-10-17 19:56:24)
That's right. It's back. I've got some new chapters I'm about to put in this thread as well. I have also fixed all the spelling errors. Here's archs one and (what has been finished of) two;



chapter one show


3DsPlaza was no longer itself the day that a gigantic wave of energy washed over the entire place. Those who touched the wave turned into an egg. People tried to run, but it was no use. Only an hour after it appeared, everyone was now an egg.

I saw white all around me. My body was a blob of light that moved slightly whenever I willed it to hard enough. Eventually, I managed to form an arm and reach out. I suddenly found myself where I was before the wave hit. At a lake somewhere in the mountains. I felt something covering my face. I could lift it up slightly so I could see, but I couldn't take it all the way off. It was attached to me. Part of my new body. I quickly realized I didn't need to see that well. I already knew where everything was somehow.

"Help! Can anyone even hear me?!"

Was that... Kishy? It sounded like it. I looked around. The trees were a lot taller than I remembered... No wait... I was smaller than everything. I walked over to the lake to see my reflection. I was a little Ralts. I laid down in the grass for a while, staring at the leaves. I reached my hand out and made one of the leaves float towards my little hand. I had phycic powers! 

I tried manipulating the leaves a little bit, but it took quite a lot of energy. My sp attack stat must not of been so high yet. Suddenly someone stepped on me while walking along. A sceptile. 


"Oh, sorry about that."

I recognised his voice but couldn't tell who he was. 

"Did everyone turn into a pokemon now? "

I asked

"Yes, and is that you AntiChrist? It sure sounds like it. I'm pheonix by the way."


Pheonix and I wandered around a little bit. We saw a scraggy and asked if he knew what was going on. Nobody seemed to know why everyone suddenly turned into a pokemon. I heard kishies voice say something again. 

"Why are there so many fires?"

Said Pheonix. I hopped up on pheonixs shoulder and looked around. In the distance were tons of fires, especially near the city. I hopped down and ran into the woods.

"What are you doing, Anti?"

"I hear something coming from here."

I said, pulling an egg out of a bush. I could hear kishy from inside my head whenever I looked at the egg.

"Kishy, you're inside an egg right now. Don't worry, you'll probably hatch soon."

She didn't seem to hear me so I tried talking telepathically. Surprisingly, I could hear her response in my head.

"ok"

Pheonix carried the egg and ran around in circles for a while. I didn't think it would work, but kishies egg hatched in no time. 

I little pink fluffy ball rolled down pheonixs arm and crashed down on top of me. I thought it would hurt but it felt really squishy. I poked it. The pink ball opened it's eyes.

"Stop poking me!"

Yelled kishy. 

"Sorry"

Pheonix laughed.

"Now you're finally not the smallest thing here!"

Kishy looked at her little arms then her chubby, circular body.

"Ugh. This body sucks. I need to evolve."

Kishy pulled out her swords and started cutting a rock exactly into the shape of a moon stone.

"How did you do that??!"

Said Pheonix

"I don't think that's going to work..."

I said. She touched the stone and was suddenly covered in light. She grew until she was a jigglypuff. 

"Hmm... I still don't think I'll be able to move around easy enough like this."

She touched the stone again and became a WigglyTuff.

"Nice"

I said. Suddenly there was a huge explosion in the distance where the city was. Kishy looked around and noticed all the flames.

"What... The HELL is going on?"

Said Kishy

"I think everyone is battling..."

Said Pheonix. 




chapter 2 show

Fluxer and pokemonbro were in the middle of a battle. It wasn't really getting anywhere because they both had high speed stats and kept dodging each others attacks. 

"We seriously need to learn some different moves...“

said fluxer

“I agree. tackle just isn't wor-" 

suddenly a vine came out of fluxers back and smacked pokemonbro in the face. 

"HOW DID YOU DO THAT?"

said pokemonbro

"I just tried it and it worked. "

pokemonbro thought about a shadow ball formimg right in front of him, and it did.

"sheer will, huh....? "

suddenly there was a knock at the door. Fluxer opened it to see an Eevee at his house. 

"Is that you, fluxercry? "

"Yes.... Meia? Is that you?"

"Yes. We need your help! All the mods are under attack!"

Pokemonbro scratched his head

"Can't they just ban them?"

"The noobs are just using pokemon moves on them that not even the ban hammers can protect them from! I saw robdeprop get killed!"

Fluxer laughed

"Impossible! Robdeprop can't die. He's the admin! Sure, people will try to use their new powers to overthrow the moderators, but he'll fix the situati-"

suddenly there were loud sirens and large crowds of pokemon running through the city. Most of them were crying hysterically. Some were unconcious and being carried by a friend. Flux saw one Ursaring laying in the middle of the street. Both of his arms were torn off.

FluxerCry took a closer look at Meis eyes. The pupils were small and the cornias bloodshot. She had obviously seen something awful. 


"God dam...."

muttered pokemonbro who was now outside looking around. There were fires, explosions, floods, earthquakes, collapsing buildings, tornadoes and one hell of a thunderstorm/blizzard. 3Dsplaza had become full of chaos. Everyone who had claimed in the past to have seen disturbing crap now knew that this was something they were not prepared for. Nobodies innocence was saved that day. 

Flux, Meia and pokemonbro joined the panicing crowd. As they were running, Meia looked up and saw an orange sphere of light. Some jackass had used draco meteor. There was even more of a panic now as some shoved eachther out of the way and some jumped under something for cover. To make it worse, some other inconsiderate individual thought it would be funny to use flash. Nobody could see where they were going. People stumbled over eachother and crawled in random directions. 

The meteors crashed all over the place in random spots. When it was over, Fluxers ears were ringing like hell. Through the smoke he could see a Metagross who survived thanks to its high sp defense stat. Meia was lying down right under him. Miraculously, she survived. 

"That hurt." 

said the metagross.

"Cr1tical? Is that your voice?"

Fluxercry coughed and looked around. The smoke was finally clearing and he could see dead bodies all over the place. Thankfully, the Absol, pokemonbro was one of the few survivors. Both Meia and pokemonbro were in a state of shock and wouldn't move. When the smoke cleared the rest of the way, Fluxercry saw that there was only one more survivor besides him, Meia, Pokemonbro and cr1tical. A zoroark who had not a scratch on him, but was clearly full of rage. It walked towards the center of the chaos, rather than the direction every other panicking individual was running. 

"What is he doing....?"

thought Flux




chapter 3 show


I still couldn't do much with the telekinesis yet. I moved around dirt particles and managed to pull a piece of grass out of the ground without touching it. Doing merely that took a lot of my energy though. I could hear pheonix thinking he seriously didn't want to go into the city. I suggested that we avoid it instead and both kishy and pheonix agreed. We went further up the mountain instead to get a good view of what was going on in the city. My guess was that the moderators no longer were powerful enough to keep things under control, and a bunch of people were now using their new power to hurt or control others. Suddenly there were a bunch of glowing hearts floating around pheonix. 

"Kishy.... did you just use attract?" 

she laughed 

"Sceptile, mind defeating Brandon for me so I can use attract on him?"

said kishy

There was no point in fighting back. I could tell pheonix had a high attack stat. Before I could even think of running, he used leaf blade on me. I was too weak to get back up. We were both now under Kishies control. 

On the way up we saw something fast moving through the trees. 

"What's that?"

said kishy

"That's a slakoth, kishy senpai :3 "

I told her. Kishy used swift and it fell out of the trees. Kishy smirked maniacally. 

"He could be useful to me. Sceptile, battle him. Do not lose."

said Kishy

"Yes, master."

said pheonix. Pheonix used leaf blade and ran towards the slakoth who was still recovering from the fall. The slakoth didn't notice Phenix until he was just a meter away. There was a small explosion. Pheonixs blades were now stabbed into a tree. Slakoth was nowhere to be seen. Suddenly, he appeared behind Pheonix. 

"Third time today someone tries to kill me... I'm getting sick of this..."

said the slakoth. I recognised his voice. It was Nutsy. Nutsy used slash, but instead of merely breaking the tree, it sliced the tree right in half. Pheonix used leaf blade again, but Nutsy dodged it so fast that he seemed to just disappear. Suddenly, Nutsy came out of nowhere and kicked Pheonix. Pheonix went flying into the woods, tumbling into a ditch.

"Great mother of Arceus! This lucky bastard has a perfect speed IV!"

said Kishy.

By the time Pheonix got up, Nutsy had already fled. 



chapter 4 show

*flashback*

A little zoroa hatches out of an egg. It's Carlos11. He contemplates what just happened as he watches a pichu walk by. An egg a few feet away from him hatches out a treeko. It's pheonix. 

"Wow. I'm totally stoked to be a sceptile! "

Suddenly, Carlos11 evolved into a Zoroark. 

"Pheonix, I think we can evolve at will."

Sure enough, pheonix emmidiately evolved twice just by thinking about it. Carlos11 walked towards the huge mansion where robdeprop lived. The door wouldn't open so he used shadow claw on the lock and went inside. Some user outside started yelling at carlos how he couldn't do that or he'd get banned. Carlos ignored him. 

As he made his way up to the top floor, there was no sign of robdeprop. There were a hell of a lot of eggs everywhere though. Carlos11 finally made his way into a room with a pool table and a bar in it. This is where SackKing101, Someluigi, and Robdeprop hung out and discussed their plans for the 3dsplaza kingdom. They were the only ones allowed in this room. There were three eggs in the room. Carlos11 inferred that since Rob, SackKing and someluigi were eggs, they must not have been the cause of or even knew about the wave that supposedly turned everyone into pokemon. He originally intended to break into the estate, question the three and lecture them on how terrible of an idea it was to give everyone powers, but instead he picked up the eggs and made his way to the roof. When he got there, he gently set the eggs down and looked over the edge of the building. 

He could see the anticipated chaos beginning. He could hear naive children yelling about how this was their chance to start a "revolution" against the moderators. Others with a typical protagonist complex monologueing about how they would stop anyone who tried the kill the moderators, referring to people disagreeing with them as "noobs". Carlos sighed.

"Peasents."

Refusing to waste any time, Carlos pulled out his phone and called a few people. Nobody was answering. They must have still been inside their eggs. 

"Am I going to have to protect these eggs by myself?"

Carlos11 said outloud to himself. He stared at the eggs for a while, wondering how he still had everything that he was carrying before he was turned into an egg. He also wondered if everyone already hatched would even be bold enough to attack each other. How little chaos would be started? 

What happened next was unreal. Everyone finally seemed to simutaneously snap. The major fighting happened all at once. Every square inch as far as carlos could see became an explosive battlefield. 

Crazy bastards even willing to smash eggs for their own amusement swarmed the rooftops in little time at all. The flying types were carlos' main concern. Eventually, he too and the three eggs were being attacked. Carlos kept them safe succesfully for five minutes by strategically using any attack he could think of that a zoroark could use and using his own moves to nullify the attacks of others. Why the hell were these guys taking so long to hatch? Carlos was becomming irritated. He ended up running with the eggs to town square. Meia was there. She tried her best to help. Carlos ended up telling her to go hide rather than get caught up in the huge cluster

Carlos only had so much energy. Eventually a huge metal looking thing showed up. Everyone who attacked it seemed to do no damage whatsoever. 

"Theres no way this guy has superior defense AND special defense stats..."

Suddenly the pokemon moved more quickly than any carlos had fought so far, and knocked him down. The pokemon was now between carlos11 and the eggs. Carlos was already weak from countless previous battles from protecting the eggs. Everything was happenig so fast. Carlos couldn't process it all. As he struggled to get up, he began to notice the change in atomosphere. Everyone was avoiding the area in which carlos and his fo were. Whoever carlos11 was fighting, he had some sort of significance. His speed, defense, and special defense... they seemed greater than everyone elses. The pokemon looked at the eggs. Meia was the only one who dared to stay in the area. Carlos could hear her hysterically screaming "No". Accepting defeat, carlos11 made the rational decision. He grabbed Meia and ran the hell out of there. He could see the eggs being violently smashed by the unbeatable pokemon in the reflection of Meias eye. 

*flashback end*

"Uh... sir. SIR!! Where are you going? What's wrong! " 

said FluxerCry to the zoroark. He started to follow, but right as he was about to grab the zoroarks shoulder, a strong force pulled him back. Cr1tical, the metagross was using psychic.

"Don't. You're going to get killed." 

Fluxercry hesitated for a while, then listened to metagross and followed him out of the city. They aimlessly walked through the woods until suddenly, Cr1tikal stopped and looked north.

"Whats wrong?" said Fluxer

"Nutsy is near by. Don't ask how I know."



chapter 5 show

"HanShotFirst, Drakkai, have you found anything? "

said Cr1tikal from far away using telepathy 

"....Yes. The ones approaching are a Ralts, Wigglytuff and a Sceptile. I have yet to identify who they are."

Dimentia leaned back in his chair. 

"As long as they aren't high level, I don't anticipate those pokemon being a threat, except for sceptile. "

Said Dimentia, also using cr1tikals telepathy to communicate with everyone. 

"I could totally take on the ralts and wigglytuff."

said Drakkai.

"Now, wait a second. There's still the possability of us dealing with some strategists here. Ralts' teleport, Wigglytuffs attract and maybe swift... then sceptile as the attacker. We can't underestimate them. "

said HanShotFirst.

"Teleport, huh? Are we prepared for this? " 

said Dimentia

"....The best course of action would be to contact dedenne. " 

Said Cr1tikal.

It had been two months since everyone had turned into and hatched from eggs. With every city destroyed and no more order or law in the world of 3dsplaza, one safe place managed to be formed. Somewhere way up north on a coast, walls were built that streched around a large valley. There, resources were collected and a small government like system was formed by HanShotFirst, a gallade, and six other pokemon. It wasn't perfect, but it was the most (or the only) in control place in 3dsplaza. Its' population was growing rapidly. Not just anybody was allowed in.

Whenever someone approached the walls that led to this place, the phycic types knew about it and took every necessary precaution. This was the plan made by those who formed this state. Occasionally, those who came were not peaceful, but they were defeated and taken into custody. 

Word started going around about the safe place, and people started coming. One of the first groups of people to arrive were Pokemonbro, Cr1tikal, Meia, Nutsy and FluxerCry. 

Pheonix and AntiChrist, all this time were still under the control of kishy. AntiChrist kept moving things around with his phycic powers, gradually getting stronger. He eventually realized he could use teleport, thus becomming one of the only two moves (including phycic) he used. 

Kishy, AntiChrist and Pheonix were now standing in front of the gate. A venemoth hovered over the top of the wall.

"Who goes there?"

said the venemoth. Kishy used attract on it and made him command the toxicroak inside the wall to open the gate. When they went in, they were stopped and interrogated by several different pokemon. They eventually were able to convince the authorities that they were peaceful and were given a cabin to stay in. 

There was a tower. This is where Cr1tikal contacted Victor from earlier. From here, everyone watched who was approaching the walls. Cr1tikals office was in there.

Crit1kal sat in his office infront of a desk. He was responding to complaints from civilians in this new state who were having problems with jobs, the food supply and whatnot. Cr1tical sighed. 

"Running a society sure is complicated. I wonder how this will work out."

Suddenly, Nutsy walked into his office.

"Hey metagross. Any luck finding your mega stone?"

"Nope... I'm starting to think mega stones don't even exist here. How boring. Anyway, did you hear that the Golurk was spotted again at the east volcano?"

"The one with all 6 perfect IVs who killed Robdeprop? How is he all over the place so fast?" 

"We still have failed to capture him. He's just unbeatable. " 

Meanwhile, carlos11 was standing on top of a mountain, staring at the walls from a distance. 

"So this is the place.... "


chapter 6 show


Drakkai took Pheonix, kishy and I into the tower and led us down some stairs. 

"Where is he taking us?"

thought pheonix. Able to hear his thoughts, I sent him a message using telepathy.

"We are going to be assigned job options." 

pheonix fell down the stairs. 

"JESUS CHRIST DUDE! That scared the hell out of me."

Drakkai looked around confused.

"Huh? What happened."

"Anti is probably using telepathy again. "

Said kishy

"being able to read minds is pretty fun."

I said. Whenever I spoke to people from inside their minds, they would usually jump and look around. Sometimes I would make the loudest noise I can think of suddenly pop into pheonixs head just to mess with him. We had become fed up with each other, thanks to kishy making us rivals when it came to which one of us kishy loved more. Of course, it was just her attract power messing with us. We had still been under its control even after two months.

Drakkai hopped over to a door with a key in his hand. Being a mudkip, he was too small to get the key into the lock that was way above him. I used phsycic on the key to put it in and turn it.

"Thanks."

said Drakkai. Everyone was led into a room with large windows that you could see the walls from. Other people who were new to the state were lined up among the walls, waiting for instructions. 

"You guys are lucky. You get to meet President Dedenne himself. He's a really scary guy though, so don't piss him off ok?"

said Drakkai

A few moments later, a small Dedenne hoped into the room. 

"ALRIGHT, LISTEN UP!"

It said in a manly voice. Hearing that come out of such a small and cute looking pokemon made most of the room bust out into laughter. Vanes started the show on the dedennes' forehead. 

A gigantic bolt of lightning came out of dedenne and crashed in front of everyone. The laughter stopped immediately. 

"Now, I expect that you give me your undivided attention. Yes, this state is a democracy... However, not everything will be perfect for everyone. You guys will be assigned jobs based on your egg group, and based on your powers. Don't like your options? WE DON'T GIVE A RATICATES ASS! You can get the hell out of these walls and find another safe place where everyone can live in harmony if you like, but we aren't going to be making acceptions here. You will be assigned job options that you may or may not like. Do you think we give a damn about your opinion? We busting our asses out here, building a damn government from scratch and gradually building a structured and organised society where everyone has safety, a home and food on their plates as long as they contribute. Do you think its easy creating this place and keeping everything under control? Think about that before you go protesting about how this place isn't enough like the old 3dsplaza. In fact, IT ISN'T SUPPOSED TO BE THAT WAY IN THE SLIGHTEST! For some reason, nobody who first comes here can get that through their thick ass heads!"

Dedenne continued his rant speech for a good thirty minutes. He went on to complain about the people who claimed that the higher ranks in the state "weren't doing their job" when in fact, they were, but it just wasn't so simple running an entire state and responding to every one of the complaints made by citizens. He ranted about people who he had to kick out of the state for refusing to listen to the rules of it, who ended up attacking it because they thought the rules were "unfair". 

What I learned about this place was that in almost everyones mind, the rules were supposed to be exactly the same here as in the old 3dsplaza. Those people thought that they didn't have to listen to rules they didn't like, and when they were punished, they called the system "corrupt". When people broke they rules, they were detained and had two options.

A: they could go to the prison for as long as they had to.

B: they could leave the state and never be allowed inside the walls again. They would have to survive on their own.

New citizens failed to realize how much was being provided for them. The ones who were ungrateful who ended up having to leave the walls, often came back and begged for the higher ups to let them back in. However, there was a rule that once you went outside the walls, you could not ever return. 

It was obvious why Dedenne was so frustrated and that he was making it as clear as possible that if you didn't like the system and the way it worked, you better get the hell out of these walls or stop complaining. Everyone seemed intimidated by Dedenne. They stayed quiet the whole time he was talking.

"Now, we will begin assigning you your job options, but first...."

he turned to HanShotFirst.

"Ask me what happens if you don't like your options, Victor."

Victor smiled

"What if we don't like our options?"

said victor. 

"Then leave."

While everyone was being assigned jobs, HanShotFirst went into his office.

HanShotFirst walked into his office and sat down. It was really dark in there, except for the light of the fire place. He sat for a while, then stood up.

"I know you are there."

said HanShotFirst. Carlos11 walked out from the shadowy corner, like a badass.

"How did you get in here.... no... how did you even get inside the walls without being noticed?. "

Asked HanShotFirst

"Do you have high authority here?" 

said carlos11. 

"Sort of... not exactly. I was one of the founders of this place, but as of now, I lead the police force here. "

"Has any past moderators of 3dsplaza come here?"

asked carlos11

"Irrelevant. Weather or not you were a moderator has nothing to do with your position here. Unlike the old 3dsplaza, being a goody two shoes that's well known will not give you any power here. Working hard will."

"Yes, but have you not noticed the pattern with the 6 perfect iv beast that's been running around?"

"The golurk? What pattern?"

"I've noticed that all his attacks happen where a former moderator is. It always results in the death of said moderator. If one is here, will you be prepared if this guy attacks? "

HanShotFirst thought about it for a moment.

"Meia is here, but I doupt the golurk will know where she is."

said HanShotFirst.

"Are you sure about that? With his strange ability to be everywhere at once, and the fact that he seemed so determined to smash those eggs that contained robdeprop, someluigi and SackThing101, but disregarded everyone else who attacked him as if he knew the significance of the eggs, AND considering the fact that everyone has supernatural powers, it isn't irrational to assume that he could somehow know where each of the moderators are. "

said carlos11

"Well, you aren't wrong. However, even if he does know where meia is, we practically have a military here. There's no need to be afraid of one pokemon alone. "

said HanShotFirst

"I've witnessed the golurks power myself. A pokemon with all six perfect IVs is not something you should underrestimate. He was completely unphazed by every attack thrown at him, and he knocked me flat on my ass. This jackass feels no remorse and kills without a second thought. "

"I understand. I'll see if we can arrange a meeting with Dedenne and discuss this issue. He is pretty strong himself. He can help."



chapter 7 show


Me, pheonix and kishy decided to join the police force. Dimentia was giving us a tour of the work station. We were led into the cells which were each very very small and had no bars keeping those in custody from getting out. Each cell was about the size of a pantry that you'd see in a typical kitchen. 

"As you can see, each of these cells have no bars or anything, yet the ones who are captured can't get out. That's because one of the job options for every ghost type pokemon is to stay in a cell with one criminal and use the move meanlook on him or her while staying inside the cell. This keeps every criminal from being able to escape. When the admims were killed, everyone with moderator privelages lost the ability to ban people. The best we can do now is keep them contained.

The ones who use meanlook to keep the criminals stuck here usually stay with them for two hours at a time then switch places with another person who knows mean look so that they can take a break. We also keep pokemon with the moves like disable, sleep powder, or anything else helpful without being destructive nearby incase one of our ghost types get attacked. For some criminals who keep acting up, we have no choice but to repeatedly use confuze ray and hypnosis on them. This has been causing a bit of controversy lately as it has been called 'cruel', especially for those facing life in prison. Sometimes we end up sending criminals back outside the walls and they end up getting killed by the state military when they come back. We already give them enough chances to go free, so I don't personally consider it unethical.

Moving on..."

Dimentia led us into a room full of bleachers and a variety of battle terrains. 

"This is where most of the training takes place. People on their breaks often come here to battle each other. "

On one of the battlefields, pokemonbro and nutsy were battling.

"Is that... Nutsy?"

Said pheonix

"Oh yeah, we started a fight with him once."

I said. Poke used double team and ran in all directions. Nutsy was slicing most of the fake pokes into pieces using slash and metal claw, when the real pokemonbro used shadow ball on him from behind. Nutsy was pushed back a few feet. He quickly got back up, but pokemonbro had already used shadowball a second time. With little time to think, nutsy used focus punch of the shadow ball and it went back over to poke too fast for him to dodge it. Poke wasn't done yet. He still got back up and ran towards nutsy while using agility.

"Wow, they must have been training a lot."

Said pheonix

"Correct. Poke has been raising his sp defense and hp stats pretty high. He can take quite a few hits. "

Said Dimentia. Poke used night slash and Nutsy used giga impact at the same time. Both collided into eachother and made a really cool explosion. Both Nutsy and Poke were still staying strong, but were almost completely out of energy. Suddenly, the referee blew his whistle.

"Times up! It's a draw!"

Said the reff

"Well, back to work."

Said Nutsy. After the tour, I was given a tazer and some guns to use since I still was pretty weak. Kishy was told that the move "attract" was now illegal and I was finally freed from her control, as well as pheonix. While I was wandering outside in the market area, waiting for further instructions, I saw president dedenne followed by a huge crowd of pokemon. Dedenne, being in charge was clearly pretty famous in the area. The large crowd of suckups surrounded him.

"Move."

He demanded, without raising his voice. Everyone immediately vacated his path. Despite his size, everyone feared him. I tried reading his mind, but I couldn't hear anything. He seemed pretty focused on getting to the tower. I also felt a gigantic amount of power coming from him. I wondered exactly how powerful he was. Some of the people who had been in this place longer must have seen just how terrifying it was.

Meanwhile, inside the tower, dedenne, Meia, HanShotFirst and carlos11 sat at a long table. 

"What is it that you wanted to discuss?"

Said dedenne.

"Am I in trouble?"

Said Meia

"Yes, you are. But not with us."

Said HanShotFirst


After explaining the situation, Meia offered to leave the walls so that nobody would get hurt.

"That won't be necessary, Eevee. We have a large variety of pokemon here. At least one strategy we have should work against even a pokemon with six perfect IVs. "

Said Dedenne.


"You do huh? If that's the case, then here's an idea...."

Said carlos11


chapter 8 show


Carlo11s plan was to have a crowbat use meanlook and toxic spikes, while another uses protect to keep the golurk from hurting crowbat. The golurk won't be able to escape while being slowly poisned until he is defeated. Just in case, there will also be a pokemon that knows flail be protected by another pokemon while another who knows false swipe attacks him until his flail attack can't become more powerful. 

Dedenne approved of this plan and also decided to train Meia himself so she'd be able to defend herself when attacked by golurk. 

Meanwhile, me, fluxercry, kishy and Dimentia got a call from HanShotFirst. By "call", I mean cr1tikal helped him contact us using telepathy. Apparently two water type pokemon and one fire type had gone and destroyed someones house and the ones who did it were now running through the woods. When we got to the area behind the house, we could see one of the walls way off in the distance behind the woods. 

"They're going to be forced to turn and go either left or right because of the wall. Where should we wait for them at?"

Said kishy

There was an obstacle blocking both paths the culprit could take. One the left, there was a lake. Over to the right there was a huge ditch. Since there were two water types, it seemed more likely that they'd go to across the lake. There was still no way to be sure though.

"I'll teleport some of us to the lake and some of us to the ditch. "

I said. Me and fluxer were at the lake. I could feel three people comming. Two water types and a fire type. 

"I think they are about to come. Get ready."

When they got close, they started to move slowly, then suddenly a tentacrool jumped out and used mean look on fluxer. I couldn't just leave him here to take on all three on his own, so I told kishy and dimentia to come quickly because I couldn't teleport them here. 

Two more pokemon walked over to where we were. A quilfish and a blaziken. The blaziken smiled at us.

"I recognise you two. You're part of HanShotFirsts' little 'police force'. You know, it's actually you people enforcing Dedennes 'laws' that are breaking the rules. You are the one who should be banned."

Said the blaziken

"There are no more bans. Inside these walls, either you follow his rules or we won't help you. You can't stay inside the walls unless you follow the rules. "

Said Fluxer

"No, Dedenne was never a mod. He can't make rules. "

"This isn't 3dsplaza anymore. You are given food and shelter here as long as you do an easy job for just a few hours a day like everyone else. If you don't want to stay here, you can leave. The rules here are different."

Said fluxer

"You think that just because robdeprop died, the rules changed now? NO! They stay the same no matter what! The mods are supposed to be the one's in control! They own these walls and everything inside them!"

Said blaziken.

"It looks like we're going to have to agree to disagree then, because clearly you refuse to listen to reason."

I said. I then teleported right behind blaziken and stunned him with the tazor. The tentacrool quickly knocked me to the ground. The quilfish used pin missle on me, but flux used leaf blade and broke all the missles, then used razor leaf. The quildifsh dodged them all and used bubble beam. I used phsycic on the bubbles, spreading them out as much as I could. The bubbles went all over the place, hitting everyone including me and flux. I wasn't quite powerful enough yet to move the bubbles where I wanted them to go. The explosions caused a bunch of smoke. When it cleared, the blaziken was now standing behind flux. He had recovered from the stunning pretty quickly. The blazikem kicked flux to the ground then used flame burst. I teleported next to flux and used light screen to protect him. The flame burst broke it easily. Flux jumped up and used razor leaf on the blaziken while tentacruel grabbed me and started using drain. 

The quilfish used pin missle to destroy fluxers attack. The blaziken then used flair blitz on him but thankfully, flux was able to barely dodge it several times. 

"AC, I could use a little help here..."

He said as both quilfish and blaziken attacked him. I was unable to do much. One of the tentacles were choking me too hard and I didn't have enough energy to use teleport again. I used phsycic on his tentacles but I could only barely loosen the tight grip. The tentacruel smiled at me in a very unsettling way.

"What a cute little runt. I might have a little fun with this one before killing it."

Said the tentacruel

"I'm a dude!"

I tried to yell, but I was being choked too hard. 

"Brandon, are you ok?"

Yelled fluxer before getting smacked to the ground by the blazikens fire punch. Flux was getting angry now. He jumped up and socked the blaziken right in the face repeatedly. The quilfish slammed himself into him and pushed flux to the ground once again. Flux was now poisned because of quilfishs ability. 

I now had an idea. I used flash, which made the tenticruel loosen his grip enough.

I tazed him in the stomach and was freed from his grip as he screamed in pain. I struggled to get up. I tried using recover but the poisoning was making it a lost cause. I pulled out my gun. I didn't want to use it, but Dimentia and kishy still had a long way to go in order to reach us. 

"AntiChrist, listen. You can teleport away and get to a hospital. I'll probably be fine."

Naturally, I disregarded that statement completely and aimed my gun at tentacool, still squirming around on the ground in shock. 

"Let us go, or I will shoot."

The blaziken laughed. 

"That should be our line, considering you guys are playing cops. It seems like you're the one in a desperate situation now. You know why? It's because we were right all along. The mods will be in control once again. That's the way it should be."

Said the blaziken.


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"Do you not care if I shoot this guy?"

I asked the blaziken. He didn't respond. He just stood there with a smug look on his face while using flame charge over and over again. He didn't move while using flame charge, he just stood there. Was that a nervous habit maybe? He continued cloaking himself in flames several times while quilfish kept flux occupied. I noticed that quilfish was now attacking more vicously. Why though? Something seemed off. I tried reading his mind.

"I just gotta keep him away from blaziken for just a few more seconds!"

Said the quilfish enthusiastically inside his mind. Wait... What?

"I haven't properly introduced myself."

Said the blaziken calmly. It was clear that he wasn't bluffing. He had a plan he was confident in. I may or not have been ready for it. Flame charge... Why that particular move. If I were in his position... To save tentacrool.... 

"My name is bruce... And I'm the one who's going to overthrow Dedenne. "

Right as he finished his sentence, I figured out was his plan was, but at the same time he moved with great speed and knocked me unconscious. The move flame charge raises your speed stat. The clever sun of a gun took advantage of that. During that time, however, I teleported all my weapons away from me. It was now up to fluxer until dimentia and kishy came.

While I was unconsious, I proceeded to watch from inside my mind, Bruce and quilfish mercilessly tossed around Flux. I was like a ghost. Floating around outside my body.

"Fluxer, can you hear me? All you have to do is defeat tentacrool. The meanlook will wear off and you will be able to run away."

I told him

"I hear you, Brandon."

Fluxercry quickly jumped up and used vine whip on the tentacrool. Tentacrool was now defeated. Flux ran like hell. The quilfish used aqua ring and put it around tentacrool to heal him. Meanwhile, blaziken dashed after flux, crashing into trees very hard because he was now too fast to control his movement well. Bruce stopped and thought for a minute, then got an idea. He anticipated the direction flux was headed, then went 500 feet from where he was. He then used fire spin multiple times, creating a huge wall of fiery tornadoes where the battle was taking place. 

Eventually, flux ran far enough to see the walls of fire blocking his path. A huge circle of fire kept flux trapped in what was now Bruce's arena. 

"Brandon, was it? I know you're probably watching like a ghost right now, being a phsycic type and all, but I'm far more clever than you are and there's no strategy you can use to outsmart me. "

Said bruce. Challenge accepted. I felt tentacrool healing and quilfish leaving to go find fluxer. It was only a matter of time before he was found and killed. I had another idea. I went inside quilfishs' head and made the voice in my head sound like Bruce's voice. 

"Quilfish, this is Bruce. Don't ask how I'm able to speak to you telepathically. I'll explain that later. I just need you to use the move rain dance. Hurry."

I said to him using Bruce's voice. Quilfish hesistated for a second, said "yes sir!" out loud, then finally used rain dance. When the rain came down and started putting out the fire that kept flux from escaping, I could see the stress drain from fluxers face. 

"Your move, Bruce."

"Well played, Brandon. However, I don't run out of ideas that quickly."

Said Bruce. Though I hate to admit it, I was exited to see what Bruce's backup plan was. Then I noticed the rain gradually stopping. Bruce had used the move "sunny day". I wasn't sure how to feel now. The thought of losing to such an arrogant person who was only rational and clever when it came to his own personal gain was unsettling. I repeatedly told flux which direction to run so the team wouldn't find him. It became especially hard to do when the tentacruel recovered and started also looking around the woods for him. Eventually, tentacrool found my uncionsious body near the lake.

He must have forgot the fact that I'm a male, considering the scary look on his face when he saw me. He wrapped his tentacools around my little legs.

"I'm a guy. Are you sure you still want to do that?"

I said through telelathy.

"A ralts is a ralts."

He said, unfortunately. 

"Kock it off, tentacrool. Don't do that."

Said Bruce as he walked toward me and tentacrool. He let go of me slowly and sighed. I have never been more thankful to be saved by an enemy. Clearly, Bruce was at least somewhat moral. The quilfish came too. 

"I figured out what you're doing now, Brandon my friend. You're telling the grovile which way to run so we don't find him. Not a bad idea, but considering how he asked you to save yourself earlier, I can infer he's likely to come to your rescue."

Said Bruce. I knew what was comming. Bruce yelled out "Grovile, wherever you are, we will kill your little friend here unless you come here at once." loud enough for flux to hear him. His eyes widened. Flux immediately dashed through the trees. This was the fastest I've ever seen him go. The look of determination on his face was freightening. Clearly, nothing I could say would make him turn back and save himself, even though now the walls of fire were small enough to leap over.


Dimentia amd Kishy were getting closer, but I still wasn't sure if they could make it in time. However, I knew flux was about to put up a good fight.



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Thankfully, Blazikens flame charges had worn off completely so his speed was back to normal. Now Flux actually stood a chance. A huge leaf storm came out of the forest and knocked the quilfish and tentacrool out of the way, followed by flux running strait toward Bruce. He furiously swung at him using leaf blade, Bruce backing up while he dodged them. Eventually he backed up so far he tripped over a root and began to slowly fall backward. Flux used to opportunity to strike, but Bruces fall turned into a bakackflip and his leg went up and kicked flux in the face. Flux stumbled to the ground and the Blaziken used flame thrower on him. Flux rolled to the side to dodge it, jumped up quickly and used energy ball. Bruce was not prepared for that attack, as it hit him right in the chest, pushing him into a large boulder. 


The quilfish used waterfall and slammed himself into Flux. Flux used leaf blade to block the attack, and eventually overpowered quilfish, knocking him out of the way. Tentacrool used water pulse on Flux. While he was trapped in the sphere of water, Bruce used hidden power and threw it towards flux with all his strength. Flux used leaf blade to cut his way out of the water sphere just seconds before the hidden power reached him. 

Flux used bullet seed on Bruce, but Bruce countered it with flame burst. The little balls of fire went right through the seeds, then collided with fluxer, knocking him back a few feet. Right as flux got to his feet, the Blaziken had already got to him and uppercut him using fire punch. Bruce then grabbed Flux by the neck and threw him against a large tree. Fluxer slowly got up. He was burnt all over the place and blood was running down his face from his forehead. He leaned back against the tree, panting. 

"Where's all that strength you had a minute ago?"

Said Bruce. Had Fluxer given up? I looked for the answer inside his head.

"This arrogant bastard forgot what ability belonged to groviles. While you're over there lecturing me, Bruce, thinking you've won, I'm preparing my last attack."

Thought Fluxer

I could see one of his hands behind his back. In his palm was an orb of yellow light that was collecting more and more energy. Flux was about to use solar beam. Since he had taken quite a lot of damage, his overgrow ability would make his grass type attacks even stronger. If he could collect enough energy before using solar beam, he could knock out the Blaziken with one hit.

As anticipated, Bruce started monologueing. 

"This is what happens when you turn away from the authority of robdeprop. This website will one day go back to the way it should be. All the ignorant noobs and their leader Dedenne, they think they are so powerful now just because they can kill the moderators, but this corruption of power will not be tolerated. I will bring this entire hole you call 'the state' to its' demise, and everyone who was arrogant enough to believe that they were better than our REAL leaders will learn a lesson they'll never forget."

Said Bruce

"You think you're some sort of superhero or something... Do you think you're going to become a mod after all this, just because you think the mods are still in control? 3dsplaza is not going to go back to the way it was! When will you realize this! Nobody is trying to 'overthrow' robdeprop. We are just building a safe place where everyone can have a home. Sure, it isn't going to be perfect for every-"

I tried to tell Bruce telepathically, but he interrupted, continuing his speech about how "evil" Dedenne is for "enslaving" the people who were only "doing what was right". It was clear that he saw this whole situation as a "noobs vs moderators" war. He just refused to see the bigger picture. 

Fluxers solar beam was now as powerful as he could make it. He couldn't store any more energy. 

"You know what Bruce... I think I understand you just fine."

Said Flux.

"....You do? Pfft. I bet you're only pretending you've really learned anything because you realize now th-"

"You think you're special."

Said Flux. 

"You think that anyone who disagrees with you is the 'bad guy', you're childish enough to murder without feeling any remorse, just because people want to build a home in the state, a place where they can be safe, even if it means following different rules than the ones robdeprop wanted us to live by. You think that a little change, just a small amount is pure evil and automatically justifies murder."

Flux continued. His voice was starting to raise a little bit. 

"Oh, so you're saying thay disobeying the rules for your own personal gai-"

Bruce tried to say, but was once again interrupted.

"No! Not everyone hatched a powerful pokemon like you! Not everyone is able to defend themselves without any help! If you really think that wanting to survive is no good reason to follow different rules than there were before, even if it doesn't affect anyone in a negative way, then you're out of your god damn mind!"

Yelled Fluxer right as he unleashed all his rage into a gigantic solar beam. Bruce quickly used blast burn to try and counter it, but it overpowered him after only a few seconds and knocked him all the way into the lake. Now that he was in there, his fire power was weakened. Fluxer fell over, breathing hard. He was now completely out of energy. 

The quilfish and tentacrool didn't dare go near him, but jumped into the lake. After a few seconds, they pulled Bruce out by the arms. Bruce still seemed to have enough energy to kill fluxer when he got up. He used flair blits to dry off, and this time his flames were white. They were even more powerful now, thanks to the blaze ability. 


He planned to use overheat. The fact that overheat was extremely powerful when used the first time, combined with the blaze ability, combined with the move sunny day would be enough to tear fluxers body in its current state into shreads. I tried desperately to wake myself up. This was the most infuriating thing I had ever seen. 

"You're really going to get it now you bastard..."

Said Bruce. He unleashed the overheat. A humongous beam of white flames came towards flux really quickly. Flux could only watch it comming towards him. He was too weak to get up. Because of the flames, the area was too bright for me to see much, but something grabbed flux and quickly pulled him out of the way. The flames tore through thousands of trees then finally hit a large rock and made an explosion too large for even a micheal bay movie. 

The figure that took fluxer leaped up a tall tree and gently set him down on a sturdy branch. It was Dimentia. Dimentia jumped down right infront of Bruce and glared at him. 

The quilfish quickly used pin missle on Dimentia, but he didn't move a muscle. Kishy appeared out of nowhere and deflected all the pin missles with her swords. They bounced back and hit the quilfish. Both kishy and Dimentia....looked pissed.



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Dimentia used bone rush. He summoned a large bone shaped staff made of aura and swung it at Bruce with great speed. Bruce struggled to dodge the attacks, but eventually got hit right in the stomach, knocking him back fifeteen feet away from Dimentia. Bruce quickly jumped to his feet and used flame burst. Dimentia ran towards Bruce while deflecting all the balls of flames out of the way with his bone staff. Bruce used blaze kick and broke the bone staff in half. He then used fire punch several times. Dimentia took two hits, dodged the rest and used force palm. Bruce was pushed up into the air and landed in the lake. 


Meanwhile, the quillfish was using iron tail while Kishy used her swords. The swords couldn't cut through his tail, so the quillfish used his tail as a sword to fight off Kishy. The tentacruel used water fall and charged at Kishy. Kishy used hidden power while still holding off quillfish and defeated the tentacruel in one hit. The quillfish started getting tired and slowing down. Finally, Kishy moved in and put a huge slash across the quilfishs chest. The quilfish squealed in pain as he started the bleed out. 

The Blaziken jumped out of the water and used flame thrower. His blaze ability was now making him as powerfull as he could be. Dimentia used aura sphere and it collided with the flame thrower, causing and explosion. Bruce and Dimentia both used close combat on each other. Dimentia, having more energy beat the living crap out of the Blaziken. 

"It's no use... I don't have the power to beat both of you. However, don't think this is over!"

Yelled Bruce as he used flame charge and ran towards the lake. 

"Do you intend to swim away?"

Joked Dimentia. The Blaziken ran so fast, he was able to run accross the top of the water like Jesus by repeatedly using flame charge.

"This isn't over!"

He yelled. I couldn't believe my eyes. Dimentia used aura sphere over and over again, trying to knock down Bruce while he ran away, but Bruce dodged all of the spheres. He had used flame charge about eight times now and was going way too fast. Kishy used swift. The stars went almost the speed of sound while catching up to the Blaziken. When they hit Bruce's leg, he face planted, summersalted about twenty times, then bounced across the water the way a flat stone would if you threw it in the water the right way. Finally, he lost the momentum to stay above the water and sunk.

I thought we had got him, but he immediately used flair blitz and started to butterfly stroke across the lake like a maniac. When Kishy used swift on him again, the stars couldn't get to Bruce without burning up in the flames around him. When he got across the lake, he continued to run into the distance and nobody was able to find him after that.

When we got to the police station, we reported to Victor what happened. Victor sent a search party to go find Bruce, but nobody could find him. He was still on the lose, ready to strike back at any moment. Meanwhile, Dimentia led Quilfish and Tentacruel to their cells. Their cells were right next to each other.

"Do you think Bruce will come back for us?"

Said the Tentacruel

"Of course he will! He'll bust us out of here in no time!"

Said the Quilfish

"Quilfish, you are going to be in here for 20 days for damaging property and resisting arrest. Tentacruel, you will be in here for 90 days for damaging property and attempted rape."


Said Dimentia. Tentacruel and Quilfish fell silent. They were shocked that Dimentia had completely disregarded their statement on how the Blaziken would be back to break them free. How could he be so calm? Was the police force really all that powerful? 

On the way out, Dimentia ran into Meia.

"Hey Meia, how's your training comming along?"

"Pretty good. I'm probably going to evolve into a sylveon since I'm being exposed to so much fairy type power every day now. "

"I heard Carlos11 left the walls to wander around so the golurk wouldn't come to this place. Is that true?"

"I think so. I haven't seen him in the tower since the meeting."


Meanwhile, Nutsy was outside collecting berries. He saw something shiny sticking out of the ground. He pulled it out and washed it off.


"No way..."

Said Nutsy. Nutsy has found a Dawn stone. He quickly ran strait to HanShotFirsts' office.

"Is something wrong, Nutsy?"

Said HanShotFirst.

"I have something important that Dedenne might want to know about... There are items in this world now."

He held up his dawn stone.

"This could be a huge problem... "

Said HanShotFirst.




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In the underground training area below the police station, Meia was sprinting, jumping and climbing her way through an obstacle course and back over and over. She had bags under her eyes and loads of sweat soaking her fur. She fumbled to the side of the room and puked all over the ground. 

Suddenly, HanShotFirst walked into the room and looked at Dedenne. 

"Aren't you pushing her a bit hard?"

Asked HanShotFirst

"It's going to take loads of training for her to even merely escape that damn golurk. Did you hear who he killed recently?"

Said Dedenne. Meia, now laying down in pain watched as Dedenne walked over to HanShotFirst, said something quietly to him, and HanShotFirst spat his tea all over the floor. 

"What's worse is that from what I've been told, she wasn't even able to put a scratch on him. There's no telling weather or not that detail is exaggerated though."

Continued Dedenne. Meia slowly started to get up. Her legs were wobbling like crazy. Dedenne used heal pulse, restoring Meias' energy completely. She continued running through the obstacle course without saying anything.

"She sure doesn't talk much..."

Said HanShotFirst


A couple of weeks had gone by since the dawn stone was discovered. Not long after that, a damp rock and pure incense were found. All three items were kept in dedennes office, but suddenly, Carlos11 came. He told HanShotFirst that a bunch of items were appearing everywhere at random. They weren't super easy to find, but he noticed that all the items he found were all 300 meters away from each other. People in the police force went outside the walls to confirm this and realized that carlos11 was right. 

Dedenne decided not to make pokemon items illegal in the state, since there would be way too much protesting. 

During those few peaceful weeks, Dedenne had set up a few tournaments to determine the strength of everyone in his police force and divide everyone into teirs.


On tier one, Dedenne, Victor and a hypno name Lance were the only undefeated pokemon and were placed on that tier. 

Tier two was Dimentia, Cr1tikal, Fluxer, pokemonbro and a pichu who had recently arrived at the state who was already powerful even though he decided not to evolve yet. 

Everyone else was put on tier three. I was in there, since I lost to a raticate in the forst round of the first tournament, which didn't suprise me since just like the time we dealt with the blaziken and his team, every job I went on resulted in me getting my ass kicked and everyone saving me. On one job I went on that involved going outside the walls, I found a small, sphere shaped stone. It was the stone a trainer needed to mega evolve their pokemon. I had no use for it so I gave it to Cr1tikal, who wanted to mega evolve really badly. Now all he had to do was find a trainer and a metagrossite. Both were very unlikely to happen though.

Everything was going smoothly in the state. People started being more obedient, no prison braks occured, still no sign of Bruce and more people were brought in the state and given a home. Since most problems inside the walls were being easily resolved now, Dedenne announced that we would be helping people outside the walls.

Outside the walls where we were safe, it was not safe for anyone who wasn't powerful. People were still being killed all around the world, homes destroyed, still no laws being created and enforced and overall, no safety. There could be no government in control because of the type advantages. The grass types were killing the water, rock and ground types, the fire types were killing them and the water types were killing the fire types. This made it impossible for one person to be in control, no matter how strong they were. 

It was now a world where the strategic conquered the strong. Still, it needed help. Dedenne raised awareness of what was happening outside the safety of the state and more people decided to join the police force, which eventually became known as a "military". 

The state saved the lives of many people around the world. Most people who came to the state for help never really had a challenging problem for Dedenne and his army, until one day an elgiem showed up.







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ARCH TWO:

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A scizor, talonflame, pansear, and an areodactyl with the pansear riding on its' back bolted toward the walls. A bunch of phsycic pokemon combined their power to make a forcefield keeping them outside the walls. The top of the wall near the attackers were lined with pokemon in the police force, throwing their strongest attacks at them.

"Damn. Just let us back inside the walls!"

Yelled the talonflame before using ember. Everyones attacks broke apart the ember easily. 

"Sorry pal, once you leave the walls, you aren't allowed back in."

Said pheonix before defeating the areodactyl by using leaf storm. The pansear jumped off its back and used match punch on pheonix. The wall of phsycic energy blocked him before he could even get close. This was the fifth time today this same team of pokemon tried to get back inside the walls. 

"Aye mate, this just isn't going to work. We have to give up."

Said the Scizor

"What??!"

Said the talon flame as he dodged dozens of attacks. 


"We can't fight the entire state. We were stupid to leave instead of just go to jail in the first place. We'll have to find safety somewhere else. Bye. I'm going."


Said the Scizor before he left. The rest followed, finally leaving the walls alone.

"It looks like we're finally done here"

I said. This was the most action we've had in weeks. There just weren't many enemies lately. A few hours later, an elgiem teleported infront of the walls.

"State your name"

Said Lance, the hypno who was always watching the outside from on top of the walls. He was a tier one pokemon who was so powerful that he could teleport thousands of miles and still have energy to battle. All of his assistants were pokemon with the ability keen eye, who spotted people around the wall that were approaching and alerted him. 

"My name is Clarence, an Elgiem. I came to live here inside the walls. I promise I am peaceful."

Clarence was led to one of the tier two members who assigned jobs. 

"Hello, newcommer! Welcome to the state! What brings you here?"

Said Cr1tikal

"Well... There are people after me... and... I sort of need protection."

Said the Elgiem

"Don't worry, I'll report this to our chief and we'll go out and bring those people to justice in no time!"

Said Cr1tikal. The Elgiem didn't seem reassured at all. The whole time he was staring at the floor, looking quite sad. 

"You see... It won't be that simple..."

Said Clarence.

"Whaaat?? You're really doubting the power of the state??"

Said Cr1tikal

"It's a large group of people. They even keep hostages in an abandoned city way outside the walls somewhere. They have a base and everything. They have yet to be defeated.... "

Said Elgiem. Cr1tikal was shocked. He used his phycic power to see if he was lying. He then asked the Elgiem to give more details. The next day, Cr1tikal reported to the situation to HanShotFirst. Clearence was summoned to a meeting with Dedenne and the other tier one members.

They agreed to help Clearence as long as he showed them where the hostages were. 

The next day, Dedenne came to the police station. 

"The reason I have called you here today is because I have a task that requires the help of much more people than usual. Apperantly, there's a group of pokemon with over 400 members that are keeping hostages. Our friend clarence has showed us where they are, and he will lead you there. "

Said Dedenne. 

"Here's what we are going to have you do..."

Said HanShotFirst

"We are going to have you divided into teams of five. I will give each of you a map showing where you will be positioned. Go there and await further instructions. You will all be given oran berries is the event of an emergency. Lance will be there in case everything gets out if hand. I expect you all to take this mission seriously. This is a large group we are dealing with."

Continued Victor. 

"Brandon, Pheonix, Drakkai, Nutsy and Josh, you will be in group A."

Said Dedenne. Group B was Kishy, Dimentia, Jake, and a couple of other pokemon I didn't know. Group C was Cr1tikal, Clearence and a couple others.

Group D contained Flux, four other pokemon I didn't know


E had Pokemonbro, Meia and a few others as well.

I noticed each group had at least one phsycic type and one tier two member.

Later that day, Dedenne asked lance, the Hypno to try and contact Carlos11 and request his help. Lance went on top of the wall an concentrated, using his phycic power to make his voice reach way out miles away from the walls. 

"Carlos... Are you there? Can you hear me?"

Thought Lance. He kept trying and waited a few hours. There was no response.


"I guess carlos11 isn't near by.... I wonder where he goes all the time."

He Went back to Dedenne.

"He isn't around. I have no way of contacting him."

Said Lance

"That's fine... I think I might send HanShotFirst to help you guys out. Just in case."

Said dedenne.

"This is the first time I've actually seen you worried about an operation, sir."

Said Lance

"It's the fact that the golurk hasn't been seen for a while lately. It bothers me. I have a feeling something is up. Is he planning to attack this place to kill the eevee?"

Said Dedenne, staring out the window of the tower with a very serious expression.

"Hey Dedenne..."

Lance said. Dedenne turned his head towards the hypno.

"Hmm?"

"....What's your real name?"



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When the sun rose the next day, the gates opened and all 30 people, groups A-F left the walls and headed off to the abandoned city. Everyones minds were connected to a telepathy link that kept everyone in touch in case something happened. 

All six groups were spread out too much for us to see eachother. Lance walked/hovered on his own. The entire telepathy link depended on him since he was the source. If he were to be defeated suddenly, the telepathy link would dissapear and nobody would know where anyone was or if they got attacked. This would have bothered me a lot, if it weren't for the fact that Lance was very powerful. He was gifted with a perfect hit point IV, making him difficult to defeat. 

It took over three hours to get to the city. Lance told us to wait outside until he was done scouting out the place. He teleported inside, jumping, across rooftops and made sure nobody else was around. He then sent an image into my groups brains, showing us where everyone was and where we were to go. Everyone in group A followed the instructions and went down the street we were supposed to. Suddenly, Nutsy heard Lances voice.


"Nutsy, there is a snorlax comming from around the corner ahead of you. He is one of the members of the group we are about to fight against. Hide in the library next to you and make sure he doesn't see you as he comes by. I will tell you when you may come out."

Nutsy led us into the building and we crouched under the windows, peeking outside. We could see a huge snorlax walking by. I could tell he was powerful. When he passed us, I noticed that he was carrying a grenade launcher between his buttcheeks. Drakkai must have noticed too, because he was trying very hard to hold in his laughter. 

"Don't laugh"

Whispered Nutsy

Group B was being led down an underground subway. Kishy heard a noise comming from down the tunnel. A whole bunch of flying type pokemon were comming her way. 

"What is Lance thinking? Shouldn't he have ordered us to go hide somewhere else?"

Said Jake

"All of group B except for Kishy, cover your ears. Now."

Ordered Lance. Kishy looked around.

"Stay put."

Said Lance. Kishy was very hesitant. What the hell was Lance planning to do? Kishy got ready to run away. The pokemon were all getting very close. Kishy stepped back a few feet. 

"Wait."

Demanded Lance. Kishy stayed put. She drew her swords. Suddenly, the pokemon were only 100 meters away.

"Now sing."

Said Lance

"What... What the hell... OH!"

Kishy suddenly understood his plan. Since she was a WigglyTuff, she could use the move sing which put pokemon to sleep. In the underground tunnel, the enemies would all hear her loud and clear.


"TURN DOWN FOR WHAT!!"

Yelled kishy as loud as she could. All the flying type pokemon stopped. It was silent for a momemt, then they all broke into laughter. A pidgeot, still trying to keep her laughter under control yelled "intruders! Get them!"

Apperantly kishy yelling that line didn't work, so she started awkwardly going "LA LA LA LA LA" Very loudly. All the flying type pokemon fell to the ground. They were all asleep. 

Lance teleported into the tunnels, then quietly teleported the flying types some other place one by one. 

"Where are you taking all of them?"

Asked Jake. 

"The state prison."

Said Lance. It was surprising that he was able to teleport that far away so quickly and still have so much energy. 


Meanwhile inside an abandoned factory, the ring leader of the gang holding the hostages, a sandslash was pacing back and forth, staring out the window. 

"CARL!"

He yelled. A breloom ran towards him, covored in sweat. 

"W-what seems to be the problem, sir?"

He asked. 

"WHERE ARE MY GUARDS! They're supposed to be on the lookout!"

Yelled the sandslash. Carl flinched.

"I uh... T-They told me ah... They were in the tunnels a second ago and they just left or something. Nobody knows where they dissapeared to."

Said the breeloom. Sandslash punched the steel wall, putting a large dent in it. An abomasnow came into the room and tossed the severed head of a blastoise to the sandslash. 

"Here's your food, sir."

He said before quickly leaving. The sandslash angrily bit off a large peace of the head with ease, as if he was biting into a marshmellow. He swallowed it then glared at the breloom. The breloom sighed.

"You look like you're about to murder me, sir."

Said carl. 

"Hey now, it isn't normal for a fighting type pokemon to be so intimidated. Here's what I want you to do; go get all of our men that know the move dig, and tell them to go be the new lookouts. The Elgiem is going to be bringing the enemies here soon. I wouldn't want to dissapoint our little visitor now. Go, hurry."

Said the sandslash. 

"Yes sir..."


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"Everyone get to the building closest to you and get to the top floor. A bunch of ground types are using dig and are about to pop up all over the place."

Said Lance telepathically to all the groups. Everyone was silent for a while. With sandslashes army all around them, nobody could easily move from their hiding spots. Lance kept ordering everyone to stay put. He thought for a while.


"Damn... I need some sort of way to get everyone closer to the factory without being spotted. Maybe a distraction would work, but we'd have to sacrifiece an entire group to make one that could be noticed by an entire city... No, even if it were possible, it'd put the whole group in too risky of a situation. I need ideas..."

Cr1tikal was getting a little worried


"Is everything alright, Lance?"

He asked

"Hm? Oh, I'm just trying to figure out something."

Said Lance

"Try asking the others for ideas."

Suggested cr1tikal. Lance was hesitant for a moment

"....Everyone, I need to form a distraction that can be seen and heard from every part of the city but without being seen. Any ideas?"

Said Lance

"Uh... I could use double team and start running around city with the fake mes. I could be all over the place at once while still hiding. "

Said poke

"Hmm... Are you strong enough to make 3,000 of you by using double team and make them spread among the city equally before being destroyed by the lookouts?"

Said Lance


"...I haven't tried making that many yet. I've only done around 18 so far. I could try."

Said poke

"I don't know. We have to be absolutely sure it will work before we try it. Any other ideas?"

Said Lance. I remember chilling inside a lantern hanging from the ceiling with my arms folded behind my head while listning to the telepathic conversation between lance and everyone giving suggestions. Being small allowed me to hide pretty well. I looked at the little flame near me in the lantern. If we had a strong enough fire type, an explosion big enough might work. Suddenly I sat up so hard the the lantern started rocking back an forth, making me dizzy.

"Lance, I have an idea"

I said

"Let's hear it."

"Sometimes I use phsycic on the air and compress it into a really tiny sphere. Sometimes, if I have enough energy I can form a small combustion by doing that. If you did it, you could probably make a huge explosion in the city somewhere and everyone around would go check it out."

I told him. With Lances' strength, I could only imagine how big of an explosion he could make by using phsycic.

"I think I could pull that off without being caught... I'll have to make sure there's a place in the city without anyone there so I don't accidentally kill anybody. "

Lance focused in all directions, looking for the ideal spot. There was an area that was completely reduced to rubble that was very centurally located with nobody there. 

"Get ready, men. When I say go, get as close to the factory as you can without being seen then hide again. "

Lance compressed tons of air into a small area. He made sure to stay far away from that area while doing that so he wouldn't be spotted. The explosion was a lot bigger than he thought it would be. I could hear the paniced screams of our enemies all over the place, having no idea what just happened. 

Meanwhile in the abandoned factory...

"Carl?"

"Yes?"

"What the hell was that...?"

"I'm being told there was a large explosion, sir."

"How large of an explosion are we talkin' here? Why the hell is everyone moving from where they're supposed to be? It was obviously a distraction. You an I both know that those idiots from the state are too soft to actually blow one of us up. They'd rather have us detained."

Sandslash slammed his palms against the desk. Breloom jumped. 

"WHY ARE THE BRATS NOT EVEN HERE YET! DID THEY GO TO CHECK OUT THAT EXPLOSION TOO?"

Yelled sandslash

"We're here, boss."

Said the snorlax with the grenade launcher between its' buttcheeks as it walked in, followed by abomasnow, a ampharos, a gigantic kingler and an emboar.

"The fatasses have arrived... Well done. "

Said sandslash

"I sure hope my brother Leviathon comes. I can't wait to kick his ass."

Said the snorlax

"Does he keep all his weapons in his ass like you do?"

Said sandslash

"He will never have my skills. Where's blastoise anyway?"

Said the snorlax

"Remember when you gys screwed up two weeks ago back when we were escaping from that perfect IV golurk? "

The ampharos winced

"He's the one that took the punishment this time, isn't he?"

Asked ampharos

"Correct. It's going to be you, snorlax, this time if there's any more failure. You talk to much."

The snorlax laughed nervously. 

Lance was now teleporting on top of the factory, watching everything, telling everyone where not to go, where they wouldn't get caught, when suddenly he felt a familiar presence from inside the factory. 

"Is that.... Carlos11??!"

Lance thought for a moment. Why would Carlos11 be inside the factory where the enemy was?

"Attention, everyone. It appears that the enemy has captured carlos11."

Said Lance finally. Everyone was shocked.

"Now way..."

Said Nutsy. Carlos11 had kicked Nutsys ass twice just for the fun of it. There's no way he could get captured.

"What the hell is going on in there..."


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When we finally entered the factory, each group entered at once from different ends of the building. Everyone was told to go to the bottom floor where most of the hostages were kept. In group A, Nutsy ran ahead into a dark hallway. There were pokemon of all kinds holding loaded machine guns. Nutsy sliced all the guns in half using slash. All the enemies were now panicked at the site of their guns suddenly explosing into pieces. Thanks to Nutsys' speed, they didn't even know what hit them. Nutsy came back around again and kicked each of the enemies in their shins very hard, making most fall over. 

I was teleporting close behind, tazing all the enemies while they were weak. While they were unable to fight back, everyone else in group A came by to defeat them. Lance then teleported to us then teleported all the enemies to the police station all the way back in the state. 

The hallway we were going down went to a dead end. This was the direction Lance ordered us to go. Suddenly, Lance used phsycic on the wall, opening it up like two doors. There was a secret elevator there. 

"Step inside the elevator. It will take you to the hostages, however, one of the elite members of the enemy group will be there. Be prepared."

Said Lance. Meanwhile, in group B, Kishy and Dimentia were defeating all the enemies by themselves while the rest followed closely behind. While the enemies were on the ground, a butterfree that was in group B came by using sleep powder on all the enemies. A Medicham in group B used safeguard so that Kishy and Dimentia wouldn't fall asleep. 

Lances' plan was absolutely flawless. When Dimentias' group got past all the enemies, they also came to a dead end. 

"Jake, wait exactly 14 seconds then use thundershock directly infront of you."

Ordered Lance. Just as the pichu unleashed his thundershock, the walls infront of them opened, revealing a secret elevator full of pokemon with loaded machine guns about to open fire on everyone in group B. However, they weren't able to because the were being electricuted. Dimentia granned every enemy in the elevator and threw them out. The butterfree used sleep powder on them so that Lance could teleport them to the station. 

"It's creepy how Lance knows where everyone is..."

Said Josh

"It's because he's the most powerful phsycic type pokemon in the state. He knows where everyone and everything is within 5000 meters of him is. He planned out everything for a reason. We probably have two high tier members in our group because there's a particularly powerful enemy where we're headed."

Said Medicham

"Yes, he planned out everything pefectly. I bet not even dedenne could outsmart him."

Said Dimentia

Meanwhile in group C, every enemy guarding their location was attacking Cr1tikal at once. The area was Dark. Everyone else in group C was clinging to the ceiling, unable to be seen by the attackers. Cr1tikal stood perfectly still, unflinching while all the enemies punched, scratched and kicked at his metal body, barely able to breach his strong defense. 

Group C was about to initiate yet another piece of Lances' master plan. Clearence was eager to see how this would play out. Cr1tikal waited for the enemies to run out of most of their energy, then used phsycic, making the enemies barely able to move. If it weren't for wasting most of their energy, they would've been able to at least fight back a little bit as the rest of group C jumped down from the ceiling and kicked their asses.




The rest of the groups used their strategies and got to their elevators at the exact same time as everyone else. This way, no individual group would have to fight Abomoasnow, Snorlax, Kingler, Ampharos, Emboar and Carl the breloom all at once. Each would not have to fight more than one of the elite members of the group. 


When Group A got down to where the hostages were, the snorlax spotted them and pulled a rocket launcher out of his ass and pointed it at them.

"FREEZE! TELL ME WHERE LEVIATH-"

"He isn't with us. He's patroling the walls."

I interrupted. I could tell by reading his mind that he and his colleagues already knew we were comming and that he hoped leviathon would be comming. How could he have known though? Had information on our plans been leaked?

Group B was against the Kingler. 

"1 v 1 me bruh. "


Said the Kingler. He was about 12 feet tall and had a six pack with large arm muscles.

"Good lord... This guy is ripped."

Said Kishy


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The snorlax pulled a hammer out of his ass and started swinging it at everyone, demanding us to take him to leviathan, which wasn't possible. Drakkai used mud shot and knocked the hammer out of his arms with it. The snorlax aimed his rocket launcher at him and fired. Nutsy quickly picked up drakkai and ran out of the way before the rocket hit him. 

"Tch! You damn pests can lick the balls of dedenne all you want! We will destroy you from the inside out!!"

Yelled the snorlax as he pulled a minigun out of his ass and opened fire at all of us. Pheonix quickly used leaf storm. A tornado of leaves surrounded us, protecting us from the bullets. The snorlax pulled two whips out of his ass and swung them at me and Drakkai. Us being so small, the whips were able to wrap around us and pull us into the air. The snorlax spun around in place, swinging me and drakkai in circles really fast as we screamed for help. 

Drakkai panicked and started using ice beam. Ice went all over the ground around snorlax. I had lost all sense of direction due to being so dizzy. I decided to teleport wherever I thought "up" was. I ended up on snorlaxs' head. I pulled out my tazor and shocked him right in the neck. He stumbled back a little bit and slipped on the ice. He was now laying on his back, the whip still in his hand. Drakkai quickly untangled himself and puked all over the ground. Nutsy then used focus punch on snorlaxs' stomach so hard that an object the shape of a disk came flying out of his ass and landed a couple feet away from him. 

The snorlax sat up and rubbed his head. He glanced at the disk and suddenly had a fearful expression.

"What is that?"

Asked pheonix. Me, drakkai and Nutsy were still laughing at the site of that flying out of his ass from being punched in the stomach so hard.

"A bomb..."


Said the snorlax. The laughing stopped immediately. The bomb was right infront of me. I used light screen, hoping it would be enough to shield me. The explosion broke through, but only knocked me unconcious rather than killing me. 
The ground underneath the snorlax collapsed. Me and Drakkai fell down into a sewer. Pheonix grabbed on to the edge of the ground using vine whip before falling underground. Nutsy was able to get out of the way before the explosion happened. 


Meanwhile, drakkai grabbed me by the pink head thingy and used waterfall when he landed in the water so that nobody would get hurt. He climbed out of the water and placed me down on a rock. He walked around for a while in the rocky underground area he fell to. He looked up and saw a dim light.

"Pheonix! Nutsy! Can you hear me?!"

Yelled Drakkai. Suddenly a granade bounced out of the darkness and landed next to him. He leaped out of the way just a second before it exploded. Three more grenades came flying out of the darkness. Drakkai used water gun on them so that they would explode before reaching him.


"Damn you snorlax..."


Drakkai used mud bomb toward the direction the grenades came from. He coukd hear it splash all over the snorlax. Furiously, the snorlax ran toward him with the grenade launcher. Drakkai spent about two minutes bouncing out of the way of grenades. Finally, he used dig and snuck up on snorlax. Drakkai leaped onto his back and started using icebeam. Ice covered the snorlaxs' entire head. The snorlax started smashing his head into the rocky walls to remove the ice. 


Drakkai started climbing up while the snorlax was distracted, trying to escape. 


Meanwhile, in group B, the ripped Kingler shot out beams of bubbles from his claw. Kishy deflected them each with her swords. 

"Cover your ears, everyone!"

Yelled kishy.

"Oh no you don't!"

Yelled the kingler as he covered his entire body, including his ears in bubble armor. He then used whirpool, trapping kishy in a large vortex. The butterfree used sleep power, but the powder was absorbed by the kinglers bubbles. The kingler jumped up and smashed the bubbles against her. When they popped, the sleep powder was released and the butterfree fell asleep. 

Lance had ordered Jake, the pichu to keep usung charge. He hated watching everybody get beat up while he awaited further instructions. 

Dimentia used bone rush and summoned his large bone shaped staff made of aura. Kingler used bubble beam again on Dimentia. Dimentia deflected all the bubbles back at Kingler by swinging the staff at them. The kingler blocked the bubbles with a large forcefield made of more bubbles. The altaria used perish song. It was so loud that all the bubbles popped and the butterfree woke up. 

Butterfree used phsycic on kingler, holding him still while Dimentia ran over to the Kingler and repeatedly slammed his staff into his head. Eventually, the Kingler got mad and broke free from the phsycic, slamming Dimentia across the room with his claw and using hyper beam on butterfree. 

Kishy had now broken free from the whirlpool amd used hidden power on kingler. The kingler grabbed the hidden power orb and threw it back at kishy. Altaria used dragon pulse on the hidden power before it hit kishy. 

The Kingler ran over to altaria and drop kicked her to the ground. He finished her off with another hyper beam. 

"Is that all you got, fgts?"


Somewhere nearby, pokemonbro, Meia and the rest of their group ran into ampharos. 

"Welcome to the hostage chamber. I am ampharos, the most powerful of the elite five. We've been waiting."

Said the ampharos as he pretended to crack his knuckles with his little stub arms.


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"Aye mate. I can handle this one."

Said a whevile on pokemonbros team. She repeatedly used shadow claw and ice punch on the ampharos. She was too quick for the ampharos to counter the attacks. However, Ampharos patiently stood still, unphazed by the attacks. Eventually, ampharos' static ability affected whevile. She was unable to move for just a second. In that small amount of time, the ampharos moved with great speed, using thunderpunch. His fist slammed into the wheviles face, knocking her out in one hit. 

"Oh crap! We should have helped her!"

Said pokemonbro. Meia got out her healing items and tended to wheviles wounds while poke, a toxicroak and a reuniclaus, the rest of group E fought Ampharos.

Meanwhile, I woke up in between a bunch of large boulders. The explosions from the grenades had made a huge wall of rocks collapse infront of me, blocking me from getting to drakkai and snorlax. I walked down a tunnel, trying to find a way out. I didn't have the energy to use teleport. I eventually found a metal wall. 

I could hear quite a lot of comotion on the other side. I wondered what was going on. I used my phsycic powers to see out of the eyes of another pokemon on the other side of the wall. There were a bunch of sandslashes guards running toward the room where the hostages were. Apperantly one of the "elite 5" called for backup. Comming from the hostage room, getting in their way was a mysterious pokemon completely covered in a cloak. I couldn't see who it was. I knew it was someone I've seen before. The cloaked pokemon attacked every pokemon in the hallway. Each person was defeated and none of their powers seemed to harm him/her whatsoever. 

"WHO IS THIS GUY? WHERE DID HE COME FROM!"

Yelled one of the pokemon. The cloaked pokemon proceeded to go beat the living crap out of every other member of sandslashes army...



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Drakkai slipped and fell down the wall just as snorlax broke free from the ice. Pheonix had finally gotten to him and caught drakkai with vine whip before he fell to his death. Nutsy was running behind snorlax, kicking his back.

When the snorlax turned around, pheonix made his attack.

"TOXIC LEAF BLADE!!"

Yelled pheonix as he used toxic and leaf blade at the same time. He slashed about four times, the snorlax unable to fight back. The snorlax fell over, defeated. Lance appeared quickly after to teleport snorlax to the police station.

"Oh, thank god"

Said Drakkai. Pheonix looked around the area.


"Where's AC?"

Drakkai used hidden power on the wall of rocks I was on the other side of a minute ago.


"I'll go find the ralts. You guys go on and help the others."

Said Drakkai


Meanwhile, Dimentia was still in combat with the ripped Kingler.

"You ain't got nothin' on me bruh. "

The Kingler kept saying. Dimentia was so annoyed by the Kinglers repetitive jeering that his attacks started becomming less defensive and more reckless. 

Dimentia released all his rage with an aura sphere so powerful it pushed the Kingler all the way to the wall. 

Lamce teleported behind Jake the pichu. 

"Go ahead."


Jake realeased all the electricity he charged up and defeated the kingler in one hit. Dimentia and jake high fived each other while Lance teleported the kingler to the station. When Lance teleported back, he suddenly froze. 


"Someone...."

Everyone looked at him confused. 

"Someone?"

Said jake. Lance didn't say anything. 


"Was there uh... Going to be anymore to that statement?" 

Said Kishy

"Sombody... From the gangs side just defeated the emboar before Cr1tikals group even had a chance to attack. We have sombody betraying the gang we are at war with and someone betraying us as well.... What is going on?"

Said Lance


"Someone betraying us? What do you mean?"


Said Kishy

"Sombody leaked information about our raid. They knew we were comming."

Said Lance

"You're kidding! Why would anybody be stupid enough to go out of their way to do something like that? How would they even be able to contact these people? They would have to leave the state!"

Said Dimentia


"If they had to leave the state to leak information about our plans, then it's probably somebody in the police force that did it. They are the only ones allowed to leave the state."


Said Kishy

"You're right, Kishy. In fact I have no doubt that it's sombody in the police force sabotaging our plans. However, we will have to focus on this problem some other time. As of now, we have to work on freeing these hostages. "


Meanwhile, the ampharos had now beaten every member in pokemonbros group except for poke and Meia, who was now healing everyone. 

Poke and ampharos both used double team. Poke used shadow ball and ampharos used thunder punch. The thunderpunch of ampharos and all his double teams deflected the shadow balls, pushing them back to pokemonbro, destroying all his double teams. Ampharos and his double teams surrounded poke and used thunder from all directions. 
Poke used protect right before the attacks hit him. The attacks caused an explosion forming lots of smoke. Ampharos was not able to see what poke was doing. Before the smoke cleared, poke used substitute then dig. Ampharos watched pokes' substitute standing still, thinking it was the real one. 

"What's wrong, absol? Got no fight left in you? I told you we had the potential to overthrow the state. You're idiocracy will soon come to an end. The rightful leaders of 3dsplaza will soon regain the power they deserve. "

Said the ampharos, making all his double teams fade away. 

"Is that what their goal is? To make the moderators in charge again?"

Thought poke. Poke used dark pulse from underground. Ampharos didn't see it coming. While ampharos was tossed into the air, Poke used confuze ray on him. The apharos, unable to focus on anything kept stumbling around, occasionally using thunder punch on himself.

Poke used nightslash on Ampharos until he was defeated. Pokemonbro had won.


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Dimentia and kishies team ran to fluxercry to help fight the abomasnow. Everyone in group A except for me and drakkai were following close behind. While the abamasnow was getting his ass kicked, Lance was hovering outside the building close to the pokemon wearing the cloak. While he watched in awe, he felt another familiar presence. 

hovering in mid air only 500 feet away from lance was the golurk who killed robdeprop, someluigi ans sackthing.


There should've been no possible way anyone could've got that close without Lance noticing. Lance was starting to get overwhealmed. He quickly teleported to the golurk. 

Meanwhile, Carl, the breloom quickly ran into sandslashes room.

"You wanted to see me, sir?"

He asked. 

"Yes. Where the hell have you been? Did you not see that pokemon crushing all my men without using any moves?! YOU BETTER HAVE A DAMN GOOD REASON FOR YOUR ABSENCE BECAUSE I'M ABOUT TO BITE YOUR MOTHERING SPINE IN HALF. WHAT THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING?"

The sandslash flipped over his desk and stomped towards Carl. 

"That pokemon in the cloak? Oh, I can't beat him."

Said Carl. His usual nervous demeanor was gone. The sandslash narrowed his eyes. Something wasn't right. Carl was not acting the way he normally was. Ever since he joined the gang a week ago, his potential was recognised immediately amd he was made second in command. His strength was amazing, yet he feared sandslash just as much as everyone else did. He had seen many cruel punishments sandlash would give to those who disappointed him and the countless times sandslash would sink his teeth into the windpipe of anyone who talked back to him without hesistation. Yet here we was, perfectly calm.

"Does that mean you're useless to me now? You know my methods of disposing this place of useless garbage don't you? Well, if you insist. Dumbass!"


The sandslash went for a punch, but Carl caught his fist in his palm. 

"Now, no need to be so angry about it. You really could use some work on those anger issues of yours."

Said carl. Sandslash took a couple steps back. He started laughing as he undid his tie amd tossed it aside.

"Feeling a little bold today, aren't you, Carl? Have fun trying to sound cool while you can. "

"My name isn't really Carl. How about I properly introduce myself?"

Carl transformed. He was now the pokemon in the cloak. 

"That cloaked pokemon was you the whole time? Were you planning on destroying this gang from the inside out by pretending you wanted to be a part of it? Not bad. You don't intimidate me in the slightest though. I could take on my entire army single handedly too if I wanted."

The cloaked pokemon tore his cloak off and threw it to the side. The pokemon under the cloak was Carlos11. 


"CARLOS!"

The sandslash yelled, going for a kick. Carlos dodged it.

"Yep. Did you miss me?"

The sandslash used rock slide. Carlos dodged all the rocks and used shadow ball on sandlsash. The sandslash knocked the shadow ball out of the way with his claw. 


"You have come here for the last time. You think now since my army is occupied you have a chance at defeating me? That is just laughable. I can't wait to rip out your kidneys and eat them."

Carlos sighed

"Putting up that act all day must be exhausting for you."

Said carlos while he used dark pulse. The attack threw sandslash into the wall. While he was down, carlos11 repeatedly used shadow claw on him then fimished him off with a focus blast. Carlos11 then grabbed him by the leg and dragged him out of the room. When members of sandslashes army saw an angry looking zoroark dragging their unconscious leader by the leg down the hall towards them, they ran like hell. 


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Nutsy used double team and kicked every guard far enough away from the hostages for everyone to attack without hurting them. Lance wasn't there to teleport the hostages to a safe area though. 

"Lance? Can you hear me? Where are you?"

Said Cr1tikal. Lance didn't respond. 


Lance was outside infront of the Golurk. Lance kicked the golurk then punched him twice. It didn't seem to do any damage. The golurk just stood there completely still. Lance used phsyshock then hidden power six times. It still did nothing. Golurks attention was focused on something else. The golurk didn't even acknowledge Lance. 

"Why are you here?"

Asked Lance. He got no response. He remembered that there were two moderators in the area. Meia and Carlos11. Lance quickly teleported to Meia, grabbed her then teleported her back to the state. 

"Meia, stay here."

Said Lance

"Wait, wh-"

Lance teleported away before Meia could ask any questions. Meia was on top of one of the walls. She sat there for a moment wondering why she was taken back here. HanShotFirst walked up to her.

"I just saw Lance. Did something happen?"

Asked HanShotFirst. 

"I don't know."

Said Meia

Drakkai and I found a way out and went back to the others. I saw lance teleporting all the defeated enemies away and Carlos11 tossing Sandslashes unconsious body over to Lance.

"If you would stay with us, you could be a tier one member."

Said Lance. 

"I'm not interested." 

Carlos walked away and went outside. Suddenly, the golurk appeared right in front of him faster than his eyes could process. Carlos jumped back a few feet.

"This guy again..."

Lance teleported in between carlos11 and the golurk with his arms stretched out.

"Do not touch him!"

Said Lance

Carlos11 used double team then transformed. There was now a copy of every single person in the room. 

"My illusion ability is how I escape golurk every single time."

Said Carlos11. 

The gorlurk looked around at all the copies of everyone then walked away.

"What the.... Is he giving up that easily?"

Said Lance


"He does the same thing every time. It's as if he actually thinks I'm not here."


Said Carlos


"....Does he ever speak?"

Asked Lance

"I don't think he can. I believe sombody made him. There have been rumors that people were able to create eggs. "


Lance pondered that for a moment. 


"If that's true... The new people hatched from eggs wouldn't even have been people in the first place. Just soulless creations that follow the commands of whoever made them."

Said Lance

"Interesting... I need to make one of my own unbeatable robot offspring."

Said Carlos

Dimentia walked over to lance and carlos.

"Hey guys, does that mean there's an arceus out there somewhere? He is the one who makes all the eggs, isn't he?"

"I don't know about that..."

Said Lane. 


"The state should start a breeding program so that we could make perfect IV armies."

I said

"If you do end up doing that, I might just reconsider and end up joining the state for good. "

Said Carlos11. 

All the other enemies nearby started running toward us. They didn't seem ready to quit yet despite having their most powerful members captured.


"Let's finish getting rid of these guys."


Said Clearence. Cr1tikal nodded. He used zen headbut and charged through the crowd of enemies, knocking tons of them across the room. Dimentia launched a huge beam of aura out of his hands, into the crowd of enemies. Poke used double team and shadow claw, defeating lots of the enemies in one hit. Fluxer used leaf storm, Drakkai used Ice beam, I teleported around tazing people, Kishy pulled out her swords and started cutting people, Lance used phsycic on about 70 pokemon at a time, defeating them in less than seconds and everyone else that I didn't mention also used their most powerful attacks. 


After a couple hours or so, the last of the enemies were defeated. 



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In the police station, sandslash sat quietly, speaking to the ampharos through telepathy. 

"They really walked into that one, didn't they? "

Said sandslash

"No kidding. They don't even know where our phsycic link is coming from. This took no effort at all."

Replied Ampharos

"Once the day of the hatching comes, we will have no problem defeating them going off how we pretty much know all their strategies now. Hail HASH."


Said sandslash

"Yes. Hail Lord HASH."

A big fat snorlax rolled into the hallway of cells. He resembled the other snorlax that was in one of the cells. 

"You say I'll never achieve anything by being such a tightass, but look at you now."

Said the snorlax outside the cell. The other sborlax turned around.

"LEVIATHAN!"


"That's right. It's me."

"It's finally my tine to get revenge for what you did..."


The snorlax pulled a grenade launcher out of his ass. A gengar behind him used hypnosis immediately and the snorlax fell asleep.


"Idiot."

Said the emboar. 


"....why are you guys so calm anyway? You don't have some sort of plan, do you?"

Said Leviathan.

Abamasnow was about to speak, but the sandslash interrupted.

"We will be exercising our right to remain silent."

Said sandslash. Leviathan sighed. As he started walking back down the hallway, he noticed a familiar tentacruel inside one of the cells.

"Weren't you let out already?"

Asked Leviathan


"After they let me go, I tried to molest AntiChrist again."

"Dude... That's the third time this month. Just stop."


chapter 11 show


We were now traveling in one big group again. Before going back home, we were going to stop by the village that the former hostages lived in and drop them off. They offered to let us spend the night there, but Lance decided that we would be going immediately after we've finished our buisness. The reason Lance couldn't teleport us all to the village was because he had not been there before. 

"Hey, carlos, is the reason golurk hasn't come to the state yet because you're his current target?"

Said Lance

"Probably. All I know about him so far is that he doesn't switch targets until his current one is dead. "

"Hmm... It seems like thanks to you, golurk won't ever be able to kill anyone else."

Somewhere else in the croud, I was sitting on pheonixs head, using phsycic on a bunch of random objects. I was finally able to lift up heavier things with the powers. 

"AntiChrist, are you going to evolve into a galade or a Gardevoir?"

Said pheonix

"Gardevoir. I'm going to be staying a ralts for a long time though."

Dimentia walked over to Lance

"Did you find out what Dedennes real name is?"

He asked

"No. I tried reading his mind after asking too, but it didn't work. I could tell he was suppressing a very long memory though. Not even I was powerful enough to get a good look at it."

Said Lance

"He won't tell you either?! Looks like our last hope of finding out is HanShotFirst."

"I wouldn't count on it. The answer probably isn't that interesting anyway"

(Haha yeah, it's totally going to have something to do with the plot eventually.)

On the way to the village I fell asleep and had this strange dream. I saw a familiar blaziken wearing a brown cloak sitting at what looked like an outdoor bar. There was a shuckle there talking to him for a moment, occasionally saying the name "Bruce". The blaziken was quiet. It didn't say much, but when it talked it was was hard for me to make out what he was saying. 

Suddenly there was a very erie feeling in the atomosphere. Shuckle and the blaziken seemed to catch notice of something in the distance. There was a small pause until finally the blaziken said something along the lines of "he's about to raise massive hell this time... How should I negotiate, shuckle?"

I knew it was Bruce when I heard his voice. The shuckle smiled. 

"It doesn't seem like he'll be changing his mind any time soon, lad. You might as well take matters into your own hands now."

Said the shuckle. I woke up right before Bruce was about to speak again. When I woke up I noticed we were at a beach. The sun was starting to go down.

"We're almost to the village."

Said one of the former hostages.


chapter 12 show


It had been a few hours since we got to the village. I found a familiar bar there, the one from my dream. The same shuckle was there serving drinks and whatnot. There was a large muscular sawk working as a bouncer. I saw him pick up a mamoswine with three fingers and throw him 30 feet away when he started causing unnecessary violence. 

There was obviously something strange going on that Bruce had something to do with. I considered interrogating the shuckle there, but the sawk looked pretty intimidating.

"Maybe I should bring Dimentia with me..."

I saw no sign of Bruce anywhere. I walked around the village so I could see if I could find him. I didn't see him anywhere. 

Meanwhile, Cr1tikal and clearece were wandering around the villages market area, looking for lance.

"Why can't we hear Lance? Didn't he make a phsycic link so we could know where he is at all times?"


Asked Clearence

"Something weird is going on... Either Lance is doing it or another phsycic pokemon is messing up the telepathic signal."

Said Cr1tikal

"The second one is unlikely, as Lance is pretty powerful. "

Said fluxer

Suddenly the entire link disappeared. Nobody was able to communitcate telepathically. Everyone was spread out around the village, unable to communicate. Now everyone would have to go find each other through some other harder method of tracking everyone down. 

I completely stopped what I was doing and froze. I was about to panic, since I was wandering off all alone but decided to remain calm and think where everyone would most likely meet up at. I looked over at shuckle. He happened to seem like he had noticed something just now and looked up at the sky. Coinsidence? I was pretty certain he had something to do with whatever was going on now. The only way Lances telepathic link on everyone could suddenly dissappear was if he just got defeated by another pokemon. 

I walked down to the bar where the shuckle was. I teleported onto one of the chairs. 


"You aren't allowed to use your powers in this area."

Said the bouncer Sawk.

"Sorry."

I watched as the shuckle filled up a glass with some sort of alchohol then slid it across the counter to a raticate. He then looked at me and smiled.

"Can I get you anything, sir?"

He said in a somewhat rhaspy voice. He seemed like he was at least 70 years old.

"Uh... Margarita please."

I said. That was the only thing I knew. Before everyone became pokemon and pretty much destroyed the government run by mods, we weren't allowed to drink until we were 21. I guess nobody in this village cared about that old rule anymore. Some hoppip sitting next to me seemed about seven years old and he was drinking a bud light. 

"How has your day been?"

Said the shuckle as he put ice and some other liquid in a thing and started shaking it. 

"Pretty good...."

I said. I was awkwardly silent for a moment.

"Do you know a blaziken named 'Bruce'?"

I asked him finally. Thanks to my phsycic powers, I could tell he was getting a little nervous, as was the bouncer who at the same time was getting slightly agitated. 

"Hmm...."


He said as he put the stuff in the thing in a glass and put some sprite in it.

"I don't recall anyone with that name."

Said the shuckle. I knew he wasn't being honest. He seemed pretty confident despite the fact he knew he was talking to a phsycic type pokemon.

"I know you are lying."


I told him, trying to make the most serious face I could. Being a ralts and all, I probably didn't look all that intimidating. She shuckle paused for a moment. He glanced over at the Sawk.

"S-"

The sawk tried to speek. I pulled out my gun and aimed it right at him.

"You will tell me where Bruce is."






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Destroiya (2015-10-17 21:12:21)
Bringin it back eh? Nice man.
I just exist at this point. Nothing too special going on.
AntiChrist (2015-10-18 15:00:27)
Unfortunately, I can only fit in so much text without chrome stopping. So, here's chapter 13 of arch two and some new chapter of it;


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The shuckle and Sawk were pretty much speechless. The poor little seven year old hoppip next to me was shaking. Suddenly he used sleep powder really quickly. I quickly jumped out of the way, some of the powder still getting in my face. The Sawk jumped forward, slamming his elbow into the table, barely missing my me. Everyone else around scattered from the area. The sawk kept going and kicked me in the face. 


Being a small ralts and all, my body was flung all the way onto the roof of the bar. I dropped my gun on purpose. Inevitably, the sawk went to pick it up. As be bent over, I teleported onto his back and tazed him. I picked the gun back up and pointed it in shuckles direction. 

He peeked his head up from behind the counter. 

"Bruce went to go find out if the existence of HASH is real." 

The shuckle said, struggling to sound calm. I couldn't tell if he was lying. The sleep powder was starting to take effect on me.

Meanwhile, at the state, Victor woke up from a deep sleep from feeling Lances' link suddenly dissappearing. He ran out of his office and to the wall gate. Meia was walking around outside, patrolling the walls and noticed HanShotFirst running towards her.

"HanShotFirst? What's wrong?"

"Meia, Lance has just been defeated by sombody. I'm leaving you in charge while I go out there to help. "

Said HanShotFirst before bolting through the gate and into the woods.


"Wait, you're going by yourself?"

Meia tried to say, but Victor was already 600 feet away from her because of hus high speed stat.



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"Who? Hashbrown? Hashtag? What?"

I asked the shuckle.

"The letters stand f-"

A signal beam suddenly hit the shuckle, sending him flying into a wall. An escavalier was standing at the doorway. Everyone ran out the back entrance except for me and the Sawk.

"Found ya."

He said. The Sawk and Shuckle were clearly not happy about the newcomer who had apperantly "found" them. I was still getting more and more sleepy because of the little bit of sleep powder that got on me. At that moment, my reflexes were crap and the Sawk smacked the gun out of my hand and ran towards
the escavalier. The Sawk didn't seem to stand a chance as they fought. The Escavalier was powerful. At least until Sawk used bulk up that is. His close combat made them equally matched.

Meanwhile, at the state's police station, Meia had been spending the whole day training and having heal pulse be used on her each time she was at her limit. Whenever she attempted to keep going at that point, she passed out and endured many nightmares of the day everyone first turned into pokemon. In them, she saw the admins and sackthings eggs get smashed, pokemon with their limbs torn off and crying children all over the place. Most ended with her and her friends being killed by draco meteor. The draco meteor nearly killing her, it's loud crashing sound and amount of deaths caused that day was the straw that broke the camels back, the thing that put her into shock for a while.

Every day, she trained constantly to get her mind off of it. People assumed Dedenne was pushing her too hard, but she was the one who insisted on being a workaholic. Now, though, Dedenne was at the tower, doing something. She trained to the point of exhaustion. When he could barely move and with no one to use heal pulse on her, she went to her house. On the way home, she noticed that a lot of fog had appeared, which wasn't unusual since the area the state was in was close to the ocean. When she was inside, it began to rain. When she looked outside, she noticed something odd. The rain was purple.

There was a knock on the door.



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Escavalier thrust both his swords forward, but Sawk grabbed both of them in his fists.

"Come to the secret exit. You can't take on his entire army on your own, child."

said the chuckle as he pulled a switch on the wall next to him which opened up a secret door. I could see a small room, but it had a dead end. It didn't look like much of an "exit" to me, but more like a trap. But then I noticed the phsycic waves coming from it. There were phsycic type pokemon that I couldn't see and they were doing.... something.

The Escavalier, unable to escape the Sawks grip, yelled for backup. Five pikachus suddenly busted through the windows. Each of them had air balloons and were flying with them. Unless they were hit by any attack, they could fly and be immune to ground type attacks. They all flew around by using quick attack in the air. They each shocked Sawk while effortlessly dodging his attacks. I couldn't teleport due to my lack of energy, so I sprinted towards my gun. A thunderbolt broke it before I could reach it. I had to evade several thunderbolts before the shuckle finally came to me and used protect to guard me. My vision was foggy now. It would be nearly impossible for me to stay awake much longer.

Cr1tikal had found pokemonbro and Dimentia. While they were searching for the rest of the group, I told Dimentia my location through telepathy right before I passed out. Right after he left to go help, three Gengar appeared. They used meanlook on everyone.

"Who are you? We don't have time to battle right now. We have to find o-"

One of the Gengar used hypnosis on Cr1tikal before he could finish his sentence. Pokemonbro tried to attack, but Elgiem used hidden power on him, knocking him to the ground.

"hey! What's the big id-"

The three Gengar all used curse at once, draining almost all of the rest of pokemonbro hitpoints. They used dream eater on Cr1tikal to regain their hitpoints. Cr1tikal was defeated. Fluxercry used leaf blade on Elgiem, but he used phsycic to hold Fluxercry still.

"Elgiem, what the hell are you doing?"

Elgiem wouldn't even look at him.

"Hail lord HASH."

he said.

"...What?"

Said Fluxer. He still couldn't break free from phsycic. Elgiem was a lot stronger than he had assumed. The Gengar each used curse on him. They used hypnosis on pokemonbro, who was too weak to dodge and used dream eater on him until he was defeated.

"No!"

Yelled FluxerCry.

"We are the Gengar trio. We work for lord HASH who will overthrow Dedenne. That Sandslash you fought yesterday was merely a puppet. While all the tier two and one members out of the state except for Dedenne, our army is marching there to break down the walls."

Fluxers eyes widened.

"Wait, w-"

they finished him off with multiple chadow balls.



chapter 16 show


Meia opened the door and saw Dedenne.

"Sir?"

"Meia, I want to talk to you about something important."

Meia let Dedenne inside and he handed her an item.

"What's this?"

"It's an ability capsule."

The ability capsule is a item that let a pokemon switch between abilities.

"A large attack will happen soon. If you chose to evolve, you can use both possible abilities that you can have. For example, if you turned into a Sylveon, you could use pixilate and the other ability. If you stay an Eevee, you will be able to use the ability runaway and escape. I've also ordered some other people to use protect on you if that does work."

Meia stared at the capsule.

"Why me, though? Wouldn't a more powerful person make more use of this item? Wouldn't HanShotFirst or Cr1tikal or someone be worth saving more?"

Outside, many people could be heard laughing and playing in the purple rain.

"You probably can't tell right now since you're an Eevee, but you have four perfect IVs."

"Four?! How do you know?"

"Lance, like many phsycic types can see other peoples stats. Once you evolve, you will be extremely powerful. That is why I trained your defense, special defense, speed and special attack. Those are your perfect IVs. You will be needed in battle. People who have evolved always became extremely powerful when they train enough while in their pre evolved form."

A scyther suddenly kicked the door in.

"WE HAVE A HUGE EMERG- ACK... EMERGEN.... URF!"

The scyther fell over, shaking. Dedenne ran over to the scyther and shook him.

"What's wrong with you? What happened?"

The scyther tried to speak again, but then flinched and started shaking.

"p-p-poison..."


He passed out.

"You were poisoned?"

Meia watched as the people out in the rain suddenly fell over. Many people tried getting under trees and stuff to shield themselves. It was foggy as hell too. Meias eyes widened.

"That is not rain!"

Meanwhile...

The Sawk was really struggling. Every time he tried to attack, he got shocked by pikachus. Every time he tried dodging the lightning, the Escavalier would strike. At one point, the Escavalier put a large gash across the Sawks stomach.

"Sawk, you have to escape with us, hurry!"

Yelled the shuckle.

"No, I will hold then off while you escape."

Suddenly, multiple aura spheres crashed through the wall and broke each of the air balloons. All five pikachu fell to the ground. Dimentia came crashing through the ceiling.

"ANTICHRIST! WHERE ARE Y-"

The Escavalier used signal beam. Dimentia dodged it and ran towards him. He used bone rush and sword fought the Escavalier. The Escavalier had to start fighting more defensively because of Dimentia sword fighting skill. Each of the pikachu used thunderbolt at once. Dimentia had to back up to get out of the way. Each pikachu used quick attack at once. Dimentia got tossed around like a rag doll. The quick attacks were coming too rapidly for him to fight back. Eventually, the Sawk used hidden power on one of the pikachus. It caused three of them to crash into each other. Dimentia sent out a large wave of aura before the pikachus could attack him again. They were sent flying into the walls. The Escavalier rushed toward him. Dimentia grabbed a table and threw it at the Escavalier. While he blocked it, Dimentia jumped into the air, forming a large aura sphere. The Escavalier didn't see the attack coming. The Sawk used close combat and beat up all the pikachus. All the enemies were defeated.



chapter 17 show


Kishy, Nutsy, Phoeni(Destroia)x, butterfree, and Weavile were somewhere else in the village, looking for the rest of the group.

"Where did carlos11 go? He was just with us."

Said Nutsy. Elgiem suddenly appeared before them.

"Elgiem! Were you able to find anyone?"

Said Pheonix. Elgiem use phsycic, holding Pheonix completely still.

"What are you doing?"

A Gengar used hypnosis on him.

Meanwhile, at the police station...

Leviathan, thanks to his immunity ability, was not affected by the poinson. He ran back and forth, carrying people to the hospital. There were dying bodies all over the place outside. Poison types helped him carry them out of the rain. Eventually, Leviathan went to the police station to get some more help. As he walked by the ass Snorlax's cell, he noticed him smirking.

The Emboar, Abomasnow, Ampharos, Kingler, and Sandslash that they fought earlier in the abandoned factory all had smug looks on their faces. Leviathan stared at his brother.

"What are you guys planning?"

"Oh, nothing."

Said Ampharos.

Dedenne ordered a bunch of flying types to use defog. When the fog cleared, a massive swarm of crowbats could be seen using the move acid downwards. They stopped and used defog to make the fog come back. There was a white flash that covered everything for a second, and then the fog was gone and each corwbat fell to the ground, defeated.

"Was that you?!"

said Meia.

"Yes."

said Dedenne. He had single handedly defeated each and every one of them with a single thundershock. People were now able to come outside. Dedenne told the flying types to go tell everyone who wasn't poisoned to hurry and get to the walls as fast as they could. Everyone who was on top of the walls, guarding them had been poisoned. Nobody was guarding them. As everyone ran to the walls, a bunch of draco meteors suddenly popped up in the distance. When Meia saw then, she froze. She wasn't able to move. Dedenne stopped and turned around.

"Meia!"

she didn't hear him. She was staring into nothing without blinking. Dedenne waved his arm in front of her waves, but she didn't react. The draco meteor balls exploded into meteors and all crashed into the same part of the wall. Large cracks began to form on it. Dedenne decided to go on ahead.

Meanwhile...

"Get in here before more members of his army comes!"

Said the shuckle. Sawk came with him into the secret entrance. Dimentia saw me passed out, being carried on his back.

"Hey, wait!"

Dimentia followed them. When the door closed behind everyone, shuckle and Sawk went through the wall that looked like a dead end. When Dimentia went through it, he saw a bunch of phsycic types. A door shaped wall of phsycic energy was what Dimentia came out of. The phsycic types were the ones creating it. They let it disappear.

"You have been transported to our secret base. "

Said the shuckle. They were in an underground area lit by torches.

"Since we're so far underground, Elgiem can't detect us."

Said the Sawk.

"Elgiem? The guy that recently joined us?"

"He never had any interest in joining the state. He's a member of H.A.S.H. Sandslash's army knew you all were coming because it was planned. You were supposed to beat them and come to this village. Meanwhile, a large portion of their army will be at the state. Without the strongest members of the state there to keep everybody in line, they will escape the prison and conquer the state from the inside. There are also members of H.A.S.H waiting outside the walls to attack."

Said Shuckle.

"Impossible. Nobody can escape HanShotFirst's prison."

"Lord HASH is a master strategist. He will find a way for them to escape."


Dimentia thought for a second.

"So... Elgiem was the traitor all along, huh? He must've been the one who messed with our phsycic communication with Lance. Is 'Lord HASH' the leader or something? Why is he even out to get us?"

I could hear the conversation while I was asleep. 'Lord Hash'. How corny. This little group we were up against seemed pretty serious. There were so many members too. If we could only find Lance. He could teleport everyone back to the state so we could stop the group from getting inside our walls. It would be that simple, I thought at the time, at least until Shuckle told us about the egg.



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Nutsy (2015-10-19 21:29:00)
I'll be reading through this again in the future.
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Destroiya (2015-10-28 02:43:18)
Was 15 all of it?
I just exist at this point. Nothing too special going on.
AntiChrist (2015-10-29 23:07:42)
Chapter 13 of the second arch is the last chapter that I made before I stopped continuing this last year.

Also, should I go ahead and start posting more chapters or wait for everyone to read the chapters that are already posted so they don't get overwhelmed and give up on it?
Destroiya (2015-10-30 02:20:16)
I'm not sure if much users are reading this.
I just exist at this point. Nothing too special going on.
little5 (2015-11-01 04:52:16)
"Please ll with the line-skipping and the saids before I rko you."

Said Marilyn Monroe
Sam (2015-11-01 05:39:49)
Where am I
AntiChrist (2015-11-01 20:23:57)
@Sam What pokemon do you want to be?
Destroiya (2015-11-02 00:09:54)
She wants to be Leafeon.
I just exist at this point. Nothing too special going on.
AntiChrist (2015-11-14 15:25:09)
Added chapters sixteen and seventeen
Destroiya (2015-11-21 20:46:38)
Noice Noice
I just exist at this point. Nothing too special going on.
 

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