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Fires.
Destroiya (2015-02-15 04:06:04)What the actual hell?
I just exist at this point. Nothing too special going on.
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carlos11 (2015-02-24 09:41:08)Is there anything you don't suck at?
Language is a tool for efficient communication. The internet is a tool for fast communication. Do not defy both intents by posting incoherent writing.
AntiChrist (2015-02-25 03:09:31)The message I guess isn't terrible ir anything. I don't hate this but it doesn't seem to be written in poem form. I'm no literature teacher so I have no idea.
Mephistopheles (2015-02-27 15:32:49)Maybe you should use meter in your poetry, Fola.
Free verse isn't for everyone.
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It's nice to see couples every once in a while.
They act so nice or so hateful one and other at times
Yet we think to ourselves that they won't last long
When really, love was always meant to be private.
Seeing two alone together would be rude as they just want to be alone.
They act how they act when they are alone.
They support each other in secret, and kiss even.
They do their own thing and they don't mind, so long as they're alone.
They want to be happy,
as their love is burning even in loneliness.