Vectrex (2015-01-09 05:11:49)

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Just working on a lucario sketch... He's kinda missing a head right now...

Criticism please (Other then him not having a head).

EDIT: Had to Simg the picture, it's too big for even pc. Damn photocopier.

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2015-01-09 05:12:54

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harfod (2015-01-09 07:46:58)

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Tiny arms. A bit fat. The leg on the left

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Nutsy (2015-01-09 11:15:39)

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Make him chibi.

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Aleks (2015-01-09 20:13:03)

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He's too wide, his patterns aren't symmetrical, his feet are too big, his left elbow should bend in a spot further down his arm (both segments of an arm are equal in length when they bend at the elbow), his arms should be longer, his chest spike should be bigger, shoulders don't work like that, and face his left hand the other way.

You, along with everyone else who posts for criticism, should probably fix all of these things so it looks better, because criticism is a lot more effective if you get criticized and then go make changes. Post again and then get more criticism until it's looking dern snazzy. (:

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little5 (2015-01-09 20:35:10)

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I don't know what any of you guys are talking about. This sketch is the best piece I've ever seen in this forum.

10/10 ~IGN

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carlos11 (2015-01-10 00:02:05)

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The head is too big.

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Vectrex (2015-01-10 07:48:29)

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^

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