little5 (2014-10-15 23:55:38)

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Her head is too big, and it isn't positioned correctly on the neck.

Her torso/breasts isn't positioned right, and her tail isn't aligned. Her thumb is a bit weird.

Tank top straps shouldn't be that close to her neck.

Her face looks okay, but her eyebrows.. You should either have both show through the hair, or neither, assuming that they're both covered by hair.

The eye is too big, if her other eye wasn't covered, then there'd be no space for the both of them (if they're supposed to be equally sized, that is).
The shading is okay, I guess. Sorry if I'm being a bit harsh.

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Leviathan (2014-10-16 02:30:47)

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The face is off center. Drives me Nutsy.

-throws a chair-

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carlos11 (2014-10-16 02:33:49)

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^Can't stop thinking about Nuts, can you?

You need to work on drawing boobs. That is all.

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Leviathan (2014-10-16 03:09:42)

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^Especially big black ones.

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AgurettiLeaf (2014-10-16 11:35:37)

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Wow, Spencer, thanks for the real criticism, m8.

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Mephistopheles (2014-10-16 13:49:49)

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Since her face is turned you might want to indicate the existence of an ear.
When it comes to drawing breasts, less is more, even if you're drawing large breasts.

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Leviathan (2014-10-17 04:59:30)

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^ I KNEW SOMETHING WAS WRONG.

The absence of hearing appendages totally screwed me in the mouth. Had there been an ear, I might not have though it was off center.


But it's mainly the eye.

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AgurettiLeaf (2014-10-17 22:14:53)

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Ah, well thanks.

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