Gamzee (2014-10-10 03:22:38)

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Rose petals bleed,
Leaving nothing to see.

Wasted away, tarnished by the world that grew around it's beauty.

The corrupt poisoned it's stem, and the petals,
They withered away.

I no longer see something beautiful,
No. I see destruction.

I see this world around me. It is beautiful, but disgusting.
The beauty was tainted by darkened hearts

Ones whom I owe nothing but the filthy bile that rises to the back of my throat.

Greed,
What tore them apart.
Lust,
What made a heinous crime.
Envy,
What killed their minds.
Sloth,
What made them selfish.
Gluttony,
What gave them sickness.
Pride,
What gave them dishonesty.
And Wrath,
What gave them corruption.

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kamcpb2000 (2014-10-11 14:59:24)

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Yes.
Amazing. You say it better than I ever could. Or Raven could, for that matter, though she entirely disagrees with what I just said. She can deal with it, huh? ^^ I love your poetry.

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Gamzee (2014-10-12 17:11:13)

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Aw thanks hun

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Thatcooldude (2014-11-12 06:06:32)

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Gamzee you are one of the few that I poetically respect.

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FireAngel (2014-11-21 11:12:53)

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Hmm... The seven deadly sins part really got my mind to focus on certain thoughts. I must add that you have a remarkable way with words.

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little5 (2014-11-24 18:05:29)

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Your poems are amazing.

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PhoenixDawn (2014-11-26 17:27:24)

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minecraft777 (2014-11-29 06:39:28)

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Your poems are awesome.

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