CandyVixen (2014-06-26 02:17:15)

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this is one of those poems that doesnt rhyme.
i use 'them' instead of 'you' or 'him/her' because it looks better as words.
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such care and kindness
feelings like these arent too simply put into words
it's peculiar how whilst your in fury, one person can calm it just by saying hi
uncompairable to other emotions
yet easly one of the best
the limitless care
the warmth and joy you feel
wanting to let 'them' know just how much they mean
but not being the best at expressing things
just wanting to be with 'them'
more than you want lots of other things.
knowing that the shortest way to say this is
i love you

This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2014-06-26 19:52:12

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little5 (2014-07-07 11:24:17)

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Nice. +1

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kamcpb2000 (2014-07-07 19:10:03)

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+1~
Truthfully, I think the phrase "I love you" is used much too often and actually has almost lost its meaning.
Yoyr poem gives it a nice tone, though. For that, I congratulate you! ^^

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