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Tears Of Black (free verse)
Started by Hunter
(2013-04-07 12:04:29)
Hunter (2013-04-07 12:04:29)
I have faded away from the grasp of life.
I have no feeling in my body.
The ground is red and moist where I lie.
My vision is in a blur.
I look around and I see nothing but black.
I feel like I'm going to slip away any moment.
Pain flows through my back as if a knife pierced,
Through it.
I can only hear the screams of pain inside me.
My fingers feel the cold ground.
My head is foggy and blurry.
My blood is stone-cold.
My body is drenched in blood.
God in heaven, teach me how to die.
As I cry Tears Of Black...

-Tribute to my brother, Robert Fox, who died of cancer. He will be missed. <3
soulsgirl (2013-04-07 12:08:02)
that is so sad Hunter
What doesnt kill me...better run pretty Dang fast
Hunter (2013-04-07 12:11:40)
I never got to say goodbye. I was only chatting with you guys until I got a phone call from my dad. :'
lolgal123 (2013-04-07 22:29:16)
That is so sad. It made me cry. Sorry 4 u. Your brother is still always with you no matter what. He is in your
Emi (2013-04-09 08:23:16)
that... so sad
Carmilla (2013-04-09 08:23:24)
Sorry for your loss


so they think i wanna die, ‘cause my thoughts are suicide..
bet my coffin would be nice, stud that up with some ice, yea..
 

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