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xxBOGGERxx (2014-07-26 22:44:53)i hope you like my song
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little5 (2014-07-26 23:05:08)Not bad.
+1You may want to get this copyrighted or something, someone could easily steal it and make a video.
YouMeAtSix (2014-08-07 12:23:29)Meh loads of grammar mistakes, I prefer the actual lyrics but it wasn't bad
carlos11 (2014-08-07 21:04:54)Moved to Poetry.
WTF, Meia?
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PhoenixDawn (2014-10-31 15:39:58)Let's get a Clint Eastwood parody.
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YouMeAtSix (2014-11-03 00:56:36)I like the way you can't spell... Now I got that over with time for serious GTFO you little loser comeback when education can help you
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Lately I've been I've been loosin sleep. Thinkin about the mobs that we might see. But baby I've been I've been fighting hard. There's no more smacking flowers we'll be smacking mobs, yeah we'll be smacking... Mobs.
I see my health, like a shrinking vine swing my sword across the line and next to me is Herobrine battle him and you shall find: the hard but its not that hard glow but its not that bright and I don't think the world is old, I'm just doing what I'm told.
I------- feel sonthing so right, usin' the rong sword! And I------ feal somethin' so rong, using the right thing!
I couldn't win couldn't win couldn't win.
Everything thing that sees me makes me go bye bye!
Baby I've been I've been crafting swords! Doing all of the things that will help me, but baby I've been I've been fighting hard, theres no more smacking flowers we'll be smacking mobs. Lately I've been I've been craftin sords! Doing all of the things that will help me but baby I've been I've been fighting hard! Theres no more smacking flowers we'll be we'll be smacking mobs.
yaaa yaaaaa ya
I feal the shock, and I let it hurt down my arm and in to my shirt my blood gushed off so let it heal, hit that bad guy, let him cry!
Hard! But its not that hard! Glow! But its not that bright!
And I dont think the world is old, I'm just doing what im told!
And I------ feel sonthin so rong using the rite sword!
I couldn't win couldn't win couldn't win!
Everything that I find helps me to survive!
Baby I've been I've been loosing sleep! Thinking about the mobs that we might see! But baby I've been I've been fighting hard! Theres no more smaking flowers we'll be smakin mobs!
Lately I've been I've been loosing sleep! Thinking about the mobs that we might see! But baby I've been I've been fightin hard theres no more smacking flowers we'll be we'll be smackin mobs!
oh ohh oohh
Hit that bad guy watch him cry you've ben hitting him its Herobrin!
Hit that bad guy watch him cry you've been hitting him its Herobrin!
Hit that bad guy watch him cry you've been hitting him its Herobein!
Hit that bad guy watch him cry you've been hitting him its Herobrin!
Everything that sees me...makes me go bye bye!
Baby I've been I've been loosing sleep, thinkin about the mobs that we might see! But baby I've been I've been fighting hard! Theres no more smaking flowers we'll be smacking mobs! Lately I've been I've been loosing sleep! Thinkin about the mobs that we might see! But baby I've been I've been fightin hard! Theres no more smacking flowers we'll be we'll be smackin mobs!
Hit that bad guy watch him cry you've been hitting him its Herobrin!
Hit that bad guy watch him cry you've been hitting him its Herobrin!
Hit that bad guy watch him cry you've been hitting him its Herobrin!
Hit that bad guy watch him cry you've been hitting him its Herobrin!
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