rememberme (2014-09-08 20:01:25)

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ana and flutter, started to fly,

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Pokemonbro12 (2014-09-08 21:22:44)

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After Joseph and Helio get the the ground they begin to walk around for no reason while Jay flys above keeping lookout

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MaxRide500 (2014-09-09 11:23:27)

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As Spark and Icicle flew on, they got a little more agitated as they went. It wasn't long before they spotted a little dark spot in the sky. *It's not a raincloud... What is is?* Spark thought to himself.

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Outsider (2014-09-10 17:26:50)

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Sulfer snuffed, agitated. "What's wrong, Sulfer?" Outsider asked, resting a hand on his neck. Sulfer snorted again, then dived. Crescent followed. "What are you-?!" Outsider exclaimed.

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LolStarr (2014-09-11 04:16:43)

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Aolanis is in a cave sleeping with Flerra & Vaporline, she wakes up T walks outside. Rubs her eyes & sees Lucky (My grandaness dog, incase you forgot) barking at the sky. "Lucky. What's wrong, boy?" He came to me & licked me, I giggled. Then he looked up again & barked. "Please, boy. If someone's out there they'll hear you. I'm not ready to meet other humans, you know that..." He stoped, looked at me, smiled, then kelp barking, each time louder. "Ouh! Lucky!"

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rememberme (2014-09-17 14:43:49)

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ana and flutter flew away looking for existance

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Pokemonbro12 (2014-09-17 21:17:42)

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Joseph herd a dog barking and Helio is looking in a different direction "What is it girl?"

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rememberme (2014-09-19 02:01:34)

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ana herd the dog barking"what is that?" she said

This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2014-09-20 09:30:37

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Pokemonbro12 (2014-09-19 03:55:17)

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@Remberme for the love of Christ learn to spell sayed is not a word said is the correct way if saying it

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LolStarr (2014-09-19 04:12:19)

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Aolanis looks up and sees flying dots. "A--are those d--d--dragons?" She ran in the cave. Lucky started to sniff around trying to find something. 'Darn dog, doesn't he know I can't be around other people?'

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Outsider (2014-09-19 17:39:16)

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Sulfur dives until he nearly hits the ground, sniffing at the vines nearby. Outsider tried to get off, but Sulfur would snort angrily if he did. "Sulfur, what's gotten into you?" Crescent glided down and joined them, her ears perking up when it did when she scented a wolf. Outsider got down, "is there a wolf nearby...?" Dragons were terrified of wolves...and they weren't too fond of dogs, either.

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rememberme (2014-09-20 02:38:58)

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(oh sorry)
flutter fly's toward, the ground, but before she crash's, she land's,

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LolStarr (2014-09-20 04:50:03)

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(You don't have to put ' between every last S in a word, unless it's a name if it's short for two words.) ^

Lucky spotted a human(Joseph) and a dragon, he growled at them & barked. Aolanis woke up Flerra & Vaporline. "C'mon, girls." She pats Flerra's back. "Vaporline, could you please look for Lucky?" Vaporline nodded and headed out of the cave.

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Pokemonbro12 (2014-09-20 16:16:04)

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"Where is that comming from?" "That way" Helio points her nose twords a cave that Joseph didn't notice "Good job girl, Jay come down boy" Joseph puts Jay in his backpack and jumps on Helios back and Helio stats flying twords the cave

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rememberme (2014-09-21 03:50:52)

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(sorry no buddy will teach me grammer and i didnt know what it was till like 20 people commented on my book and said horrible [i spelt that wrong] grammer) ana spots joseph "who is that?" flutter growls,

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